DS9 11x12 - "Vigil"

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  1. DS9Continuing

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    Hi all

    Time for episode 12.

    Here's the links:

    Deep Space Nine Season 10 - eps 1 to 22


    11x01 - "Systems Under Repair" (Ad Astra, pdf, ebook)
    As Ro settles into command, Prynn pleads for help with rescuing her father.

    11x02 - "Structural Integrity Compromised" (Ad Astra, pdf, ebook)
    While the Defiant responds to a distress call, Prynn tracks down answers.

    11x03 - "Self Destruct Initiated" (Ad Astra, pdf, ebook)
    A survivor of the Ascendant attack causes havoc in the Bajoran system.

    11x04 - "Separation Manoeuvres Complete" (Ad Astra, pdf, ebook)
    Things fall apart for Kira, Odo and the Dominion alliance.

    11x05 - "The New Normal" (Ad Astra, pdf, ebook)
    After Vaughn’s return to the station, new crew arrangements need to be made.

    11x06 - "Two Steps Forward" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
    Cardassia sends a new representative to the station, but not everyone welcomes him.

    11x07 - "In Love and War" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
    Vaughn assigns Prynn, Nog and Candlewood to a secret mission on Empok Nor.

    11x08 - "Puppy Love" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
    As Pif tries to find a job on the station, Quark and Ro babysit the puppies.

    11x09 - "The Laughing Policeman" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
    The station’s new security chief arrives, leaving Major Cenn with a dilemma.

    11x10 - "Gut Feelings" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
    When Raiq falls ill, the situation could lead to catastrophe for the crew.

    11x11 - "The Crucible" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
    When Vaughn takes Ro on a training voyage, things go from bad to worse.

    11x12 - "Vigil" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
    Sisko’s friend Prylar Eivos dies, leading to problems between him and Kasidy.



    NOTE: This story dramatises events first described in the licensed Star Trek novel Rough Beasts of Empire, written by David R George III.


    I also owe thanks to TrekBBS.com member DerangedNasat for his work on translating the Bajoran language, as seen in this thread, some of which I used in this story.


    Enjoy!
     
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  2. DS9Continuing

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    TEASER​



    FADE IN:



    1 EXT. SISKO’S HOUSE - DAY



    It’s moving towards winter in Kendra province. Trees are shedding their leaves, the sky is grey and cloudy, and the air is damp with drizzling rain.



    2 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


    A roaring natural fire burns in the fireplace. SISKO sits cross-legged on the living room floor, back against the sofa, playing the jacks and marbles game with REBECCA. They giggle and shout together as they play.

    After a few moments of happy, carefree play, KASIDY emerges from the kitchen, hovers in the archway. She’s anxious but trying not to be. Sisko looks up at her, sees her mood.

    SISKO
    Don’t worry. He’ll be here soon.

    KASIDY
    He’s just not usually late. It’s
    not like him.

    SISKO
    Things happen. He’s the docent in
    charge of excavations at B’Hala.
    It’s a big job. I’m sure he’ll be
    here when he can.

    KASIDY
    (not reassured)
    Yeah, I guess.​

    Kasidy comes and sits on the couch, her hand resting on Sisko’s shoulder. He clasps his hand over hers to comfort her while continuing to play with Rebecca.

    KASIDY
    Are we sure it’s a good idea to
    have Rebecca here this time?

    SISKO
    Why wouldn’t we?

    KASIDY
    We’ve always handed her over to
    Jake and Rena before. Or sent her
    round to the Fenliks’ house to
    play with Joasha.

    SISKO
    (chuckle)
    Why, are you worried we’ll start
    beating each other with bat’leths
    in front of her?

    KASIDY
    Just that I always wanted to keep
    her away from all of that. Anyway,
    mine’s in the shop being polished.​

    Sisko turns, grips Kasidy’s hands more firmly, looks her in the eye. Rebecca continues to play on her own.

    SISKO
    Kasidy... we’re getting better.
    We’ll be fine. ​

    Kasidy nods in agreement, if a little hesitantly.

    There’s a KNOCK at the door.

    SISKO
    See? Told you he’d be here.​

    Kasidy stands from the sofa, straightens her outfit, goes to the door.

    She opens it, not to Prylar Eivos, but to a human woman of Malaysian descent, nevertheless wearing a Bajoran Militia uniform. Mid-to-late-20s. Her name is JASMINE TEY.

    She’s received with surprise, and not a little alarm.

    JASMINE
    Captain Sisko, Captain Yates?

    KASIDY
    Yes, that’s us.

    SISKO
    (standing)
    Is there a problem, Sergeant?

    JASMINE
    Ummm... may I come in? I’m afraid
    I have bad news.

    SISKO
    Yes... yes, of course.​

    Kasidy holds the door open. Jasmine steps tentatively into the room, looks around politely, disguising a security officer’s scan of the territory.

    KASIDY
    Rebecca, honey? Why don’t you
    go play in your room for a while?

    REBECCA
    Okay, mommy. Love you!

    KASIDY
    Love you too, sweetheart.​

    Rebecca picks up her jacks and marbles and takes herself off deeper into the house. Jasmine hovers awkwardly, but Sisko directs her to the sofa.

    SISKO
    Can I get you anything?

    JASMINE
    Thank you, no. I should introduce
    myself – my name is Jasmine Tey.

    KASIDY
    So you are human – I thought so.
    Just surprised that you’d be in a
    Bajoran uniform.

    JASMINE
    I’m on First Minister Asarem’s
    personal security detail. I signed
    up shortly after Bajor joined
    the Federation.

    SISKO
    We weren’t expecting a visit from
    the First Minister’s staff. We were
    rather expecting Prylar Eivos
    from B’Hala.

    JASMINE
    Eivos Calan, yes. He’s actually
    the reason I’m here. And since
    it’s you, Captain, the First
    Minister assigned me personally.

    KASIDY
    Sergeant... what’s wrong?

    JASMINE
    There’s been an incident. There
    was a fire, and Prylar Eivos and
    his wife... I’m afraid they’re
    both dead.​

    Off Sisko and Kasidy’s reactions to that…



    FADE OUT:



    END OF TEASER​
     
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    ACT ONE​



    FADE IN:



    3 EXT. BAJOR – EIVOS’S HOUSE



    A different house, but this one is a burned out husk. Walls scorched and fallen, holes in the roof, smoking piles of incinerated rubbish. Bajoran deputies move around the area.

    A few steps away, a TRANSPORTER deposits Sisko, Kasidy and Jasmine. Sisko and Kasidy look over the sight with dismay.

    SISKO
    You didn’t have to come, Kas.

    KASIDY
    You came.

    SISKO
    But I’ve seen things like this
    before. You shouldn’t have to.

    KASIDY
    Calan and Audj are my friends
    too, Ben. ...Were my friends.​

    Sensitive to the situation, Jasmine leads them closer to the house. But before they enter, she stops them again.

    JASMINE
    Captains... you should prepare
    yourselves. We haven’t been able
    to clean up much of the mess yet.
    In fact, the bodies are still inside.
    I asked you here so that you could
    provide a definitive identification,
    but if you’d rather not...

    SISKO
    We’ll be fine. Please, carry on,
    Sergeant.​

    Jasmine opens the scorched and warped door, holds it for them, and they step inside.



    4 INT. EIVOS’S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM


    Inside, the house is a disaster zone. A Bajoran DEPUTY is busy cataloguing and scanning and inspecting. He gapes in awe at the sight of the Emissary. But at a subtle glare from Jasmine, he remembers himself and gets back to work.

    Stepping carefully, Jasmine leads Sisko and Kasidy through the house.

    SISKO
    Was it deliberate?

    JASMINE
    We don’t know for sure yet. But
    from all the available evidence
    so far... No.

    KASIDY
    An accident? How can something
    like that happen in this day and
    age? Aren’t there safeties attached
    to... well, everything?​

    Sisko offers her a gentle hand on the shoulder in comfort.

    JASMINE
    Many Bajorans prefer to live
    without all that technology. I
    think it reminds them too much
    of the Cardassians. They’d
    rather keep things simple.

    KASIDY
    I understand that. But I didn’t
    realise Calan was one of them.

    SISKO
    Did we really know him enough
    to say that? He came to us
    whenever we asked... but we
    never bothered to come to him.

    KASIDY
    He would never have asked.​

    They step through another doorway…



    5 INT. EIVOS’S HOUSE - BEDROOM


    Inside this room, a Bajoran Militia DOCTOR has his back to them at first. He turns to greet them, revealing two BODIES placed on a singed bed and draped in grey sheets. Everyone is quiet, respectful.

    JASMINE
    Doctor?

    DOCTOR
    Ah – Sergeant Tey. And Emissary.
    It’s a pleasure to meet you, sir.
    I only wish it were under better
    circumstances.

    SISKO
    Likewise, Doctor. May I...?​

    Sisko reverently approaches the dead bodies of his friends. He gently lifts the sheet from one. We don’t need to see what’s underneath, but we assume it’s not pleasant. Sisko moves to the second body, does the same. He steps away.

    SISKO
    Yes, it’s definitely them. Was
    there anybody else?

    JASMINE
    A neighbour saw the flames and
    alerted the local authorities.
    Then she tried to help, and got
    a bad case of smoke inhalation.
    But other fatalities... no.

    KASIDY
    And you’re certain there was no
    foul play? Doctor?

    DOCTOR
    I’d rather withhold any final
    pronouncements until my autopsy
    is complete. But for the moment
    I agree with the Sergeant. This
    was nothing but a tragic mistake.​

    Sisko is obviously wounded – the Doctor tries to comfort.

    DOCTOR
    I understand he was your friend,
    Emissary. If it helps, I’m quite
    certain he’s with the Prophets.

    KASIDY
    (quiet mutter)
    He served them all his life.
    I should hope so.

    JASMINE
    I imagine his colleagues at the
    B’Hala site will want to arrange
    a memorial of some kind.

    SISKO
    I’d like to attend that.​

    Jasmine nods, and leads them back out of the room.



    6 EXT. BAJOR - SISKO’S HOUSE


    Back to the cold and blustery day in Kendra province.



    7 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


    Sisko and Kasidy re-enter the house, wrapped up from the cold, both downcast and muted.

    JAKE and RENA have been babysitting Rebecca. They both stand. From the expressions on Sisko and Kasidy’s faces, it’s clear that the worst has been confirmed.

    Jake steps to his father and hugs him tight. Rena likewise to Kasidy. Then they swap. The hugs break. Rena gestures that she’ll put the kettle on. Jake smiles his thanks.

    As Sisko and Kasidy move deeper into the house and slump onto the sofa, Rebecca picks up the mood. She comes from where she had been drawing in a book and sits between them.

    She doesn’t know why, but she knows her mummy and daddy are sad. So she reaches out to hug Kasidy too. Kasidy holds her tight, strokes her hair. Takes comfort from her daughter.

    Sisko watches, and smiles sadly.



    8 INT. BAJORAN SHRINE


    A rustic temple in the Bajoran countryside. Stone walls, the usual Bajoran signifiers. This is a small place, local and intimate, and its trappings are suitably modest.

    There is one large duranja lamp burning at the front of the shrine, and two simple wooden coffins on either side of it. Over each coffin’s head stretches a temporary grave arch.

    A low-level PRYLAR, probably still the most senior cleric in the area, stands by the lamp, reciting the traditional prayers. A middling crowd chants quietly. Nothing grand, just friends and neighbours. Eivos wasn’t a big deal.

    A creak of wood as the door at the far end of the temple opens, and Sisko tentatively steps through. He immediately knows he’s interrupting, and feels ashamed.

    The nearest row of worshippers notice the newcomer and gape in astonishment – the Emissary! At our tiny little church! Whispers begin to spread through the small crowd, confusion and excitement. Even the prylar is distracted.

    Sisko curses himself. He shouldn’t have been the centre of attention here. He slips sideways into a spare place and tries his best to blend into the crowd. The prylar calls attention back to himself, and begins his prayers again.



    9 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


    This is a different day from earlier; Jake and Rena have gone. Kasidy now moves around the kitchen, doing ordinary domestic work. Simple things to keep herself occupied.

    She dries pots and puts them away in the cupboard. She wipes down the surface of the replicator. She folds towels and hangs them over a rack. She’s alone in the house.

    Eventually, Kasidy stops at the window and looks out to the back of the house. The enormous tree in their back yard is stripped bare of leaves, stark and jagged.

    Rebecca runs around out there, wrapped up warm in a big coat and hat and mittens, quite happy entertaining herself.

    Kasidy stands at the window, watching her baby girl play.



    10 INT. BAJORAN SHRINE


    The funeral continues. The prylar chants. The crowd have now got used to the fact that the Emissary is among them - mostly. Aside from a few nervous glances his way, the ceremony is continuing as normal.

    At the back of the room, trying not to be noticed, Sisko joins in as best he can. He doesn’t know all the words. He feels bad about that. He should know them.

    The prylar gently casts two handfuls of sand, one for each of the deceased, into the flames of the duranja lamp. The sand burns away quickly in colourful bursts of flame.



    11 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


    Evening now. Kasidy and Rebecca sit at the dinner table, both eating. Rebecca’s plate is an adorable miniature version of the same thing Kasidy is having, and the little girl is tucking in heartily.

    Kasidy is more hesitant, distracted. She looks towards the window at the front of the house. It’s getting dark. Ben should have been home by now. She knows he’s unlikely to be in any danger, but she doesn’t like him not being here.



    12 INT. BAJORAN SHRINE


    The funeral is over, and the congregants are slowly filing out of the temple. But almost every one of them wants to say a polite hello to Sisko on the way out.

    He greets them all demurely, offers murmurs of condolence and encouragement that they are thrilled to receive. They won’t stop coming, and they all mean well, but he really doesn’t want the attention.

    At last they have all gone, and Sisko is relieved. He turns towards the front of the shrine, where the prylar gathers his things, tidying away. Sisko approaches quietly.

    The prylar greets him warmly. Sisko apologises for the disruption; the prylar will have none of it. He’s grateful that the Emissary should bless their little community.

    Left alone at last, Sisko stands and gazes into the flames.



    13 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


    Full night now. The lights inside are dimmed. Kasidy sits in the rocking chair by the fire, reading a book. Rebecca has long since gone to bed. The front door opens.

    Tired and cold, Sisko slouches into the house. Kasidy looks up, and sees the exhausted look on Sisko’s face.

    KASIDY
    It’s late. I was starting to get
    worried.

    SISKO
    I know, I’m sorry. I got caught
    up talking to people. They all
    wanted to talk to the Emissary.​

    She gets up and gives him a peck on the cheek in welcome. He holds her firmly in response. Kasidy pulls away.

    KASIDY
    I’ll make you a hot drink. Get the
    blood running again.

    SISKO
    Wait...
    (Kasidy hesitates)
    I think I’ve decided something.
    I wanted to tell you.

    KASIDY
    What’s that?​

    Sisko heads over to slump onto the couch; Kasidy follows and sits with him.

    SISKO
    It was... quiet. Too quiet.

    KASIDY
    The funeral?

    SISKO
    (nods)
    I know it’s only a small temple,
    but he deserved more than that.

    KASIDY
    He was a humble man, Ben. He
    didn’t put on all the airs and
    graces so many of them do.
    It wasn’t his style. I thought
    that was why we liked him.

    SISKO
    But he was doing good work. At
    B’Hala, and with us. We needed
    him. And now he’s gone...

    KASIDY
    Are you saying we can’t do this
    without him?

    SISKO
    No, that’s not what I’m saying at
    all. I’m saying I want to carry on
    his work.

    KASIDY
    What do you mean?

    SISKO
    I want to go and work at B’Hala.​

    Off Kasidy’s reaction to that…



    FADE OUT:



    END OF ACT ONE​
     
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    ACT TWO​



    FADE IN:



    14 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE



    Kasidy is instinctively unhappy with Sisko’s declaration. But she is determined to hear him out and not react badly.

    KASIDY
    Work at B’Hala? Why would you want
    to do that?

    SISKO
    It’s important work, Kas. They’re
    exploring the ancient history of
    Bajor. Doesn’t it fascinate you?

    KASIDY
    Not particularly.

    SISKO
    It’d be nice to get out of the
    house for a change, do something
    constructive with my time.

    KASIDY
    So... spending time with me and
    Rebecca, that’s not constructive
    for you.

    SISKO
    What? No! I mean, yes! Of course
    it is. That’s not what I meant.

    KASIDY
    What do you mean, Ben?

    SISKO
    I haven’t had a job since I left
    Deep Space Nine. I just want to do
    something again. Going to B’Hala
    would give me that. And it’s a way
    I can honour Eivos’s memory.​

    Kasidy tries to order her thoughts, make them calm.

    KASIDY
    I know you miss Starfleet –

    SISKO
    It’s not Starfleet I miss. Or at
    least not Starfleet per se. I
    miss being useful.​

    Kasidy gets up from the sofa, gives herself some space.

    KASIDY
    Useful. Again, all that sounds
    like to me, Ben, is that you don’t
    think being with me and Rebecca
    is useful.

    SISKO
    How could you think that?

    KASIDY
    Well, you’re talking about going
    to B’Hala. About honouring Eivos’s
    memory. Maybe it’s just me, but
    all I can hear is more reasons for
    you not to be here.

    SISKO
    This again? I’ve been here for you
    as much as I can, Kasidy. I’ve
    barely left this house for the
    last two years.

    KASIDY
    Except for that time you left on
    a mission you had no intention
    of coming back from.

    SISKO
    I did come back.

    KASIDY
    And I should think myself lucky,
    is that it? I should be happy to
    be second best to all of Bajor.​

    Getting indignant now, Sisko joins Kasidy in standing up.

    SISKO
    You’re my wife, Kasidy. The woman
    I married. The mother of my child.
    The one I do everything for.

    KASIDY
    Then why am I not enough? Why
    do you have to take every chance
    to run off to practically the other
    side of the planet –

    SISKO
    Oh, don’t exaggerate. B’Hala is
    hardly on the other side of the
    planet. I walked it from here.

    KASIDY
    Ah, I see. It’s my fault. I threw
    you out of the house after you
    attacked Rena, forced you to go
    all the way to B’Hala. Eivos gave
    you a bed when I wouldn’t.

    SISKO
    Eivos is a good man, Kasidy. And
    yes, he took me in when I had
    nowhere else to go. He didn’t
    ask questions, he didn’t make
    demands. He just understood.

    KASIDY
    He understood that you called your
    daughter-in-law a ‘thing’? That
    you got so caught up in all your
    Prophets and Ascendants crap that
    your own son had to punch some
    sense into you?

    SISKO
    They both accepted my apology.

    KASIDY
    I didn’t.

    SISKO
    Obviously.

    KASIDY
    You know what? Go. Go to B’Hala.
    Run back to your precious Bajor,
    Emissary. Maybe it’ll understand
    you better than I can.

    SISKO
    Fine. I will. I’ll leave first thing
    in the morning.

    KASIDY
    Why wait?
    (points at sofa)
    You might as well get used to
    sleeping on rocks right now.​

    Kasidy turns her back on him, stalks to the bedroom. She opens the door, enters, and SLAMS the door behind her.

    Sisko stands alone in the middle of the darkened room, the lights of the fire flickering on his face.



    15 EXT. SISKO’S HOUSE - NIGHT


    Outside the house, the wind is still whipping up. The trees wave, drizzle dampens the whole area. The light from the house and the flickering fire through the windows are nowhere near enough to warm up the scene.



    CROSS-FADE INTO:



    16 EXT. BAJOR SURFACE – B’HALA



    Establishing the archaeological dig at the ancient city...



    17 INT. B’HALA CAVES


    The warrens and excavated spaces of the buried city, last seen in 10x21 “In the Stars”. Bajoran iconography and ancient statues. Artificial lights are strung up, and monks and prylars work painstakingly by them to reveal yet more.

    Sisko stands with a handful of other people, mostly Bajoran but perhaps one other race for colour.

    A young female ranjen, SOOL, stands at the front, greeting them all with an official spiel.

    SOOL
    Alright, thank you for coming. The
    B’Hala Restoration Project is a
    vital initiative for both the past
    and future of Bajor, and we are
    grateful for the help of anyone
    who wishes to offer it. Volunteers
    such as yourselves are the life
    blood of this project, and we
    couldn’t do it without you. Now,
    each of you will be paired with a
    more experienced worker, who
    will answer all your questions,
    show you around the base,
    explain our procedures and
    teach you how to use the tools.
    Some limited refreshments will
    be made available later. Again,
    thank you all, and may you
    walk with the Prophets.​

    The volunteers begin to split up, Sool introducing each of them in turn to their work buddy.

    As usual, the other Bajorans offer admiring glances and giggling whispers at Sisko’s presence. He nods to them politely, but tries not to get involved.

    Because Sisko has been shyly hanging back, he’s the last in line to meet his buddy. Sool bows her head.

    SOOL
    Emissary. We’re all honoured to
    receive you.

    SISKO
    Please, just call me Benjamin.

    SOOL
    As you wish, Emissary. ​

    Turning away, she doesn’t see him grind his teeth.

    SOOL
    Luka? Could you come here, please?​

    A man emerges from the depths of the caves, a bit dirty and covered in the dust of the excavation. It’s LUKA, the older Ohalavar man from 11x06 “Two Steps Forward.”

    SOOL
    Emissary, please meet Luka Tirem.
    He’ll be your guide and your work
    buddy here at B’Hala.
    (tense)
    Luka – be on your best behaviour.​

    With a slightly obsequious bow to Sisko, and a warning glare to Luka, Sool leaves them alone. Luka wipes his hands on his pants and reaches out to shake Sisko’s hand.

    LUKA
    Captain Sisko. A pleasure to meet
    you, sir.

    SISKO
    You didn’t call me Emissary.

    LUKA
    I’m with the Ohalavaru, Captain.
    We don’t believe the Prophets
    are gods... and we don’t believe
    you’re the Emissary. No offence.

    SISKO
    (relaxes)
    Absolutely no offence taken, Mister
    Luka. In fact, it makes a nice change.

    LUKA
    Please, call me Tirem.

    SISKO
    Then don’t call me Captain, either.
    Call me Benjamin.

    LUKA
    Happy to. Follow me, Benjamin.​

    Sisko is already more relaxed in Luka’s company that he has been in days. The older Bajoran leads him further into the caves, past other pairs of volunteers and ranjens showing them the ropes. While they walk...

    LUKA
    I have to say, we were all a bit
    surprised to see you come in with
    the latest batch of volunteers.
    I would have thought the famous
    Captain Sisko of Starfleet had
    bigger batos to bury.

    SISKO
    I was a good friend of Prylar Eivos.
    I wanted to carry on the good work
    he was doing here. My son worked
    here for a few months while I was
    away. I thought it was only right
    I do the same.

    LUKA
    Oh... you knew Calan. I... I didn’t
    know that.

    SISKO
    Sorry, I didn’t mean to just blurt
    it out. Were you close?

    LUKA
    He was kind of my sponsor here.
    He was a good man. I owed him
    a lot. I’m sorry he’s gone.

    SISKO
    Aren’t you going to assure me
    he’s with the Prophets?

    LUKA
    I told you, the Ohalavaru don’t
    believe in the Prophets. Not as
    gods, anyway. They’re obviously
    there, and they’re important and
    powerful. But why would you go
    to powerful aliens when you die?

    SISKO
    I guess I’m not used to Bajorans
    not worshipping the Prophets.

    LUKA
    With Kai Solis in the Apex Chair
    now, the Ohalavaru are growing
    all the time. There’s more and
    more of us out there every day.
    I’m guessing you don’t know a
    lot about us, though.

    SISKO
    To be honest, Tirem, I’ve tried
    to keep out of Bajor’s religious
    problems. I’m afraid that any
    position I take, any support I
    might give, someone would
    blow it out of all proportion just
    because I’m the Emissary.

    LUKA
    Probably a wise precaution. I know
    from personal experience just how
    passionate Bajorans can be about
    their beliefs. This dent in my skull
    right here can tell you all about it.​

    Luka taps his own head, seeming so casual about it. But Sisko is horrified to hear it. They reach a new sub-cave.

    LUKA
    Ah, here we are. Benjamin Sisko,
    welcome to your new quarters.​



    18 INT. B’HALA CAVES – BUNK ROOM


    Sisko looks into the smaller cave, which is laid out with a dozen sleeping bags on the ground, rickety metal lockers on one wall, and a portable cooking range on the other.

    SISKO
    Okay. This is good. Back to basics.
    I can appreciate that.​

    Luka chuckles. He knows Sisko is lying. They enter the room and Luka begins pointing things out.

    LUKA
    This’ll be your bed roll. You can
    store your tools and any personal
    items in the lockers.

    SISKO
    Personal items? Like what?

    LUKA
    Like your secrets.

    SISKO
    Secrets? What secrets?​

    Luka steps up close, a conspiratorial gleam in his eye. Sisko is little wary.

    LUKA
    I found something. In the caves.
    They don’t believe me. They all
    think I’m crazy. But I know what
    it is. It’s a clue.

    SISKO
    A clue? To what?

    LUKA
    The location of Ohalu’s grave.​

    Off Luka’s excitement, and Sisko’s guardedness...



    FADE OUT:



    END OF ACT TWO​
     
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    ACT THREE​



    FADE IN:



    19 INT. B’HALA CAVES – BUNK ROOM



    Sisko reacts to Luka’s pronouncement. The man is excited, eyes gleaming, but wary of anyone over-hearing.

    SISKO
    His grave? Why would you even
    think Ohalu is buried here?

    LUKA
    Where else? This is where Istani
    Reyla found the book. This is
    where the ten-thousand are buried.
    The place is named after him!

    SISKO
    Really?

    LUKA
    B’Hala. Ohalu. You never put it
    together?

    SISKO
    I guess not.

    LUKA
    Alu comes from his Eav’oq name.
    But in ancient Bajoran, it also
    means ‘the one place’. The only
    place. And adding the B’ prefix
    makes it sacred.
    (to the sky)
    B’Hava-el.
    (the ground)
    B’Jaara.
    (grasps Sisko)
    B’Hala. The only sacred place of
    Ohalu. Where else would he be?

    SISKO
    Then you know he was an Eav’oq?
    And you’re okay with that?

    LUKA
    I admit I wasn’t happy at first.
    I felt like they were taking Ohalu
    away from me. I lashed out. Got
    into trouble. But with some time,
    I realised... I don’t care what he
    was. I only care who he was.
    (beaming)
    Now stop dawdling. We’ve got
    work to do!​

    The man is certainly passionate. It’s infectious. Sisko grins, and lets Luka show him to the tool lockers.



    20 INT. B’HALA CAVES - TUNNELS


    Hours later, deeper into the excavation site. Luka forges ahead through the tunnels at a pace, with Sisko trailing behind. There are electric lights periodically along the passages, but they are getting fewer and farther between.

    LUKA
    Come on. It’s this way.

    SISKO
    Wow. I guess I’m out of shape.
    You’re really excited about this.

    LUKA
    Oh, Benjamin. I can’t even begin
    to tell you how much better I feel
    since I came here. And I promise
    you will too.

    SISKO
    What makes you think I need to
    feel better?

    LUKA
    You said you came here because
    of Prylar Eivos. Why – is there
    some other reason?

    SISKO
    No... No, just Eivos. So, what led
    you to volunteer?

    LUKA
    Ah... well... strictly speaking, I’m
    not a volunteer. I’m here for...
    rehabilitation.

    SISKO
    What do you mean?

    LUKA
    I’d been in protests before. Even
    a couple of fights. But this was
    the first time I’d ever taken it
    so far. Stupid stupid stupid...
    (gathers self)
    Luckily, the other guy decided not
    to press charges. And the magistrate
    accepted that I wasn’t quite in my
    right mind. The brain damage, you
    know? So I got off with community
    service. Prylar Eivos took me in,
    looked after me.

    SISKO
    Yeah. He does that.

    LUKA
    That’s why I was the last one to
    be assigned to anybody. And why
    they gave me to you – if I went
    crazy again, you could take me.​

    It was meant as a joke, but when Luka turns around to see Sisko’s reaction, Sisko isn’t smiling.

    LUKA
    Don’t worry, Benjamin. I’m not a
    danger to anybody.
    (carries on)
    You know what? I think it’s fate
    that brought me together with you.
    You’re the one who rediscovered
    B’Hala. And it was Kira Nerys the
    Truthgiver, and your own wife,
    Benjamin, who uncovered... this.​

    Luka turns a corner, Sisko follows him, and they see…



    21 INT. B’HALA CAVES - MAUSOLEUM


    As briefly seen in 8x03 “Avatar, pt 3”. The burial place of the ten-thousand, foretold in Ohalu’s book. A giant underground hall with notches along the walls, carrying ancient crypts and mummified remains as far as the eye can see.

    Sisko steps into this, gazes at it with genuine awe.

    LUKA
    Step carefully. It was perfectly
    preserved for thousands of years.
    Since they broke through a few
    years ago, they’ve tried their
    best to keep it that way. So don’t
    touch anything.

    SISKO
    This is... I don’t have words. It’s
    beautiful. And so... sad. Why did
    you bring me here?

    LUKA
    Because this is where I found it.
    Come with me. Carefully.​

    Luka begins to pick his way carefully through the cavern, making sure not to touch anything. Sisko follows.

    After a while, they reach somewhere near the middle of the giant room. There’s a statue, something like the weathered shapes at Yyn, but more complete. It could be a depiction of an Eav’oq – tall and thin, with one great smiling eye.

    SISKO
    So this is Ohalu.

    LUKA
    Blessed student of the Teacher
    Prophets. Whose words brought
    light, and wisdom, and peace.
    Ohalu was the original Bajoran
    religion, you know.

    SISKO
    I have a feeling the Vedeks would
    argue with you on that.

    LUKA
    (sharp)
    Then they’d be wrong.​

    Sisko looks askance at him – that was a bit harsh. But Luka is already crouching down, brushing the dust away from something on the ground. He’s harder now, angrier.

    LUKA
    Who do you think brought knowledge
    of the Prophets to Bajor?

    SISKO
    I thought that was the Orbs.

    LUKA
    (dismissing it)
    The Orbs only started appearing
    ten-thousand years ago. Ohalu
    was here thirty-thousand years
    ago. He was here first.

    SISKO
    Okay...

    LUKA
    But the others – they suppressed
    us. Tried to pretend we never even
    existed. Took the legend of B’Hala
    for themselves. This is our place!
    They don’t have the right!​

    Sisko reaches out to touch Luka’s shoulder, comfort him. Luka spins to glare at him - Sisko flinches back a bit.

    LUKA
    (manic)
    Look at this. Come on, look!​

    Sisko crouches down by Luka, looks at what he’s been brushing. There are carvings around the base of the statue, runes in ancient Bajoran. Luka relaxes somewhat.

    SISKO
    Ancient Bajoran runes. I can read
    these.

    LUKA
    See? Fate.

    SISKO
    You can’t read them? But you –

    LUKA
    I learned everything about Ohalu.
    Every word, every interpretation.
    But I can’t read ancient Bajoran
    just like that.
    (grin)
    I knew you would, though. You’re
    the Emissary.

    SISKO
    (wary)
    You said you didn’t believe I was
    the Emissary.

    LUKA
    Well, okay, yes, I did say that.
    But... that’s missing some of the
    nuances. I mean, obviously you are
    the Emissary, being defined as the
    man who contacted the Prophets.
    But... if we don’t think of the
    Prophets as gods, then obviously
    the guy who talks to them isn’t a
    god either. You’re just not that
    important to us. Sorry, that was
    probably a bit blunt.

    SISKO
    No, it’s okay. It's... humbling.

    LUKA
    Which is not to say that we don’t
    respect you. I mean, your daughter
    is the Avatar, the symbol of a new
    age for Bajor, foretold by Ohalu
    himself. We still follow you on
    the news.

    SISKO
    That’s very flattering.

    LUKA
    Benjamin... you don’t seem happy.
    Admittedly I don’t know you that
    well... yet... but I’d kind of got the
    impression you were getting more
    comfortable with being the Emissary
    of the Prophets.

    SISKO
    I was. Until I started to understand
    better what it really meant. What
    they expected me to do for them,
    how they kept taking me away
    from my friends and family...

    LUKA
    I’m sorry.

    SISKO
    That’s part of why I barely left
    the house. To try to show Kasidy
    I would never leave her...

    LUKA
    But also to escape all of the
    Bajorans calling you Emissary.

    SISKO
    Yes... I could avoid it most of the
    time when I lived on Deep Space
    Nine. There I was just a Starfleet
    captain. But here, on Bajor, there’s
    no escape. People always wanting
    to meet me, shake my hand, almost
    genuflecting wherever I go.

    LUKA
    Well, if it’s any comfort to you, I
    won’t genuflect. I’m not sure my
    back could take it.

    SISKO
    (sad smile)
    It’s selfish, I know. But I wish more
    of your people felt that way.​

    Luka turns back and starts brushing more dust away from the carvings, in a happier mood now. But Sisko is darker.

    LUKA
    Speaking of Deep Space Nine, I was
    there recently.

    SISKO
    Really? Why?

    LUKA
    Well, you know I mentioned some
    trouble with the law... that was
    where it happened. It’s not anything
    I’m proud of, but... oh, I might as
    well just say it. I tried to kill someone.

    SISKO
    You did what?

    LUKA
    The Cardassian ambassador. I told
    you, I wasn’t in my right mind. It was
    the stupidest thing I’ve ever done –

    SISKO
    Did you kill Prylar Eivos?​

    Luka turns to Sisko, astonished. Sisko’s face is like thunder, dark and deadly.

    LUKA
    What?

    SISKO
    He was my friend. Him and his wife.
    Did you kill them both?

    LUKA
    Benjamin – no! I would never -​

    Sisko pulls Luka roughly up by the shoulders, shoves him violently against the statue. Shakes him back and forth.

    SISKO
    Are you a murderer? Is that what
    you are? Did you set their house
    on fire? If you’re the one who -​

    Luka SCREAMS, a terrified whimper-wail of utter fear. Sisko lets go in shock. Luka throws his arms up around his head, protecting himself, shrieking and cowering in terror. He crouches back down to the ground, as small as possible.

    SISKO
    Luka, I...​

    But Luka only SCREAMS even louder.


    LUKA’S POV


    We look up, the mausoleum dark and ominous, closing in around us. Sisko looms over us, a sneer of absolute hatred on his face, a metal pipe in his hand. He raises the pipe, swings it down towards us, ready to pummel us...


    BACK TO SCENE


    Luka shrieks all over again, scampers to his feet and tries desperately to escape. Sisko reaches out to try to comfort him – Luka only screams all the louder. Sisko watches him flail, horrified. What has happened to the poor man?

    Luka runs across the giant underground room, dashes into one of the crypt slots in its huge stone walls. He backs himself into a corner, curls up into a ball, arms wrapped around his knees, rocking himself back and forth, head BANGING against the stone wall hard enough to break skin.

    LUKA
    Please don’t hurt me please don’t
    hurt me please don’t hurt me...​

    Sisko approaches, slowly and gently, trying not to spook Luka any further. Luka is obviously a psychological wreck.

    SISKO
    Luka... I’m so sorry...​

    Luka just whimpers again, keeps banging his head...

    Sisko crouches down to his level, hands up to show there’s nothing in them. He shuffles forwards one slow step at a time, careful not to appear threatening.

    LUKA
    Please don’t hurt me please don’t
    hurt me...

    SISKO
    I won’t hurt you. I promise I
    won’t hurt you. I’m sorry.​

    Sisko is finally able to reach Luka, who is practically catatonic with fear and panic. Sisko gently wraps his arms around the man, pulls him in close. He holds Luka against his chest, cradles him, rocks him back and forth.

    SISKO
    I’m sorry. I’m sorry. I’m sorry.
    I’m sorry...​

    Oh Sisko’s sad, upset, horrified face...



    FADE OUT:



    END OF ACT THREE​
     
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    ACT FOUR​



    FADE IN:



    22 INT. B’HALA CAVES - MAUSOLEUM



    Sisko and Luka now sit side by side on the stone ground, Luka still curled up into a ball but no longer whimpering or rocking himself. Sisko is sad and pensive, talking to himself as much as to the silent and traumatised Luka.

    SISKO
    I always do this. Take it too far.
    This is exactly what Kasidy was
    talking about. Why I hurt Rena
    and Jake. Why she threw me out
    of the house. And she was right
    to do it. I get so caught up...
    (shakes head)
    I take it too far.

    LUKA
    (quiet, small)
    I know how that happens.​

    Sisko turns to him, relieved that he’s talking again.

    SISKO
    Tirem... I’m so sorry. I never
    meant to hurt you. I won’t hurt
    you again. And I don’t believe
    you hurt Calan and Audj.

    LUKA
    I didn’t. I didn’t. I wouldn’t.

    SISKO
    I believe you. Sergeant Tey said
    it was a terrible accident, and I
    have no reason not to trust her.

    LUKA
    He was a good man.

    SISKO
    And so are you. I’m sorry.​

    Sniffling, Luka raises his head, gazes at the statue.

    LUKA
    I understand. It’s not always easy
    living here, where we live. Among
    all these people who don’t think
    the way we do. Who always expect
    something else from us.

    SISKO
    I can’t begin to know what you
    went through –

    LUKA
    (turns to him)
    Yes you can. You’re a good man
    too, Benjamin. You don’t deserve
    what’s happened to you either.

    SISKO
    (grateful, sad)
    At least one person forgives me.​

    Sisko and Luka sit with each other, inside the crypt...



    23 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


    On Kasidy, as she sits at the dining table, padds in front of her. She’s doing paperwork for her shipping business.

    The house is quiet around her, she’s alone. Then there’s a KNOCK at the door. Not really thinking much of it, Kasidy gets up to answer the door. It’s Jasmine Tey.

    KASIDY
    Oh – Sergeant Tey. Is there a problem?

    JASMINE
    No no, not a problem. May I come in?

    KASIDY
    Yes, of course. Can I get you anything?​

    Kasidy holds the door open for Jasmine to enter.

    JASMINE
    You wouldn’t happen to have any
    Earl Grey tea, would you?

    KASIDY
    As a matter of fact, my brother
    sends me some from Cestus Three
    twice a year. Come on through,
    I’ll brew you up a cup.​

    Grinning, Jasmine follows Kasidy through to the kitchen, where Kasidy starts rooting in cupboards.

    JASMINE
    That would be fantastic. I’d never
    have thought, now that Bajor is in
    the Federation, it would still be so
    difficult to get human food and
    drinks. I haven’t had a decent
    cup of tea in years.

    KASIDY
    (chuckle)
    Well I have to warn you, I’m no
    chef. But I think I can manage to
    boil some water without burning
    the house down.​

    Kasidy realises with horror what she just said.

    KASIDY (cont)
    Wow... that was...

    JASMINE
    It’s okay. Don’t worry about it.
    That’s actually why I came – to
    tell you that we’ve finished the
    investigation.​

    Kasidy finds the tea, starts preparing it.

    KASIDY
    And?

    JASMINE
    And it’s exactly what we thought.
    There’s no evidence of any foul
    play. Just an electrical fault in
    the central heating. Probably
    had it on high for the winter.​

    Kasidy leans back against the counter, sighs sadly.

    KASIDY
    There’s nothing you can say to
    that, is there? Just... fate, I guess.

    JASMINE
    The Bajorans would say it was the
    will of the Prophets.

    KASIDY
    (scorn)
    To take the life a man who served
    them seventy years, and his wife,
    just because it got cold? Not any
    kind of god I’d want to follow.​

    The tea is ready. Kasidy hands a mug to Jasmine, who wraps it in her hands, warming her fingers. They stand and chat.

    KASIDY
    So, Sergeant Jasmine Tey. How does
    a human woman end up on Bajor
    as part of First Minister Asarem’s
    personal security squad?

    JASMINE
    Didn’t really plan it. I came to
    Bajor just to visit and explore a
    new culture. But it was soon after
    the whole mess with those nasty
    parasites. Asarem was looking to
    beef up her security. Or at least
    her advisers were. So I decided
    to sign up.

    KASIDY
    Just like that?

    JASMINE
    I’d had all sorts of security and
    combat training at home. I had
    nothing tying me to Earth. And I
    thought it would be a chance to
    really dig deep, learn about
    Bajorans from the inside. Plus,
    I have a feeling I was a bit of a
    status symbol to them. Proof that
    they were really one of the gang
    now. So they snapped me up.

    KASIDY
    And how do you like it? Living and
    working with Bajorans, and so few
    other humans around?​

    Kasidy is kind of giving herself away here. Jasmine sees it, wonders how to address it. Is it even her business?

    JASMINE
    We’ve all had to make adjustments.
    But then, that’s just a part of the
    life. You’ve been here longer than
    I have, from what I hear. You
    haven’t... adjusted?

    KASIDY
    It’s funny. When I first set up
    this house, I felt comfortable.
    Beautiful world, perfect place to
    build a home and raise a family.

    JASMINE
    And now?

    KASIDY
    I don’t know. Somewhere along the
    line, I think I started resenting
    them. And I don’t even know why.
    They haven’t really done anything
    wrong. Maybe it’s all in my head.

    JASMINE
    That doesn’t necessarily make it
    wrong.​

    Kasidy smiles at the unexpected support. Nobody’s really said that to her before.

    JASMINE
    I hope I’m not out of line here,
    Mrs Sisko. Please stop me if I am.
    But I did sense some tension
    between you and your husband.

    KASIDY
    (quiet)
    You’re not out of line. It’s a relief
    to be able to talk to someone
    about it. Someone who’s not going
    to assure me that it’s all part of
    the Prophets’ plan. It just feels
    like... Bajor is coming between us.

    JASMINE
    Bajor? Not the Prophets?

    KASIDY
    Is there a difference? Prophets,
    Bajor, Ascendants, Cardassians,
    Eav’oq... it’s all the same.
    (beat)
    Is it my fault? Am I letting them
    come between us? Eivos said it was
    in our hands. And I’ve got nothing
    to complain about, not really. Ben’s
    right, I knew what I was getting into.

    JASMINE
    Kasidy... if you’re not happy, you
    have every right to those feelings.
    And you have every right to let
    people know it.

    KASIDY
    Thank you, Jasmine. It’s good to
    hear someone say that.​

    Jasmine smiles back. They go back to drinking their tea.



    24 INT. B’HALA CAVES - TUNNELS


    On their feet again, Sisko and Luka now tread through a darkened tunnel. No electric lights hang here – they find their way by old-fashioned flame torches. Sisko takes the lead, now just as eager and determined as Luka was earlier.

    Sisko stops, shines some light onto the paper in his hand.


    PAPER


    It shows pencil etchings of the ancient Bajoran symbols that were around the statue of Ohalu.


    BACK TO SCENE


    Sisko points out each scribbled icon in turn.

    SISKO
    Close... light... community...
    lessons... spirit... earth...
    beloved... and source.

    LUKA
    (wild guess)
    The source of light... is close?

    SISKO
    But these were written right at
    the base of the statue. Anyone
    who could read the words could
    see Ohalu standing there.

    LUKA
    So what would be the point of
    telling them he was close?

    SISKO
    Exactly. Let’s keep walking.​

    They get on the move again.

    LUKA
    This must be the deepest anyone’s
    ever gone at B’Hala. Just think...
    thirty-thousand years of Bajoran
    history over our heads right now.

    SISKO
    Let’s just hope it stays there and
    doesn’t decide to come down on
    our heads.

    LUKA
    Earth... You said earth, right?

    SISKO
    Right.

    LUKA
    As in, what’s over our heads. What
    we’re inside of right now.

    SISKO
    What are you getting at?

    LUKA
    Close to the earth. To the ground.

    SISKO
    But it’s all the ground.

    LUKA
    But it wasn’t. Thirty-thousand years
    ago, this might have been open air.
    (gestures up)
    All of this is what’s built up over
    the years on top of that.

    SISKO
    So ‘close to the earth’ would mean
    we have to go even deeper.

    LUKA
    Where are we right now? How far
    have we walked?​

    Sisko stops, pulls out a tool – a complex compass device. He holds it, lets it steady itself, interprets the results.

    SISKO
    We’re almost immediately beneath
    the mausoleum.

    LUKA
    Underneath the statue.

    SISKO
    Of course! Close, but in a downward
    direction. Into the earth.

    LUKA
    Where the source of the light and
    lessons lies beneath his beloved
    spiritual community.

    SISKO
    We have to go deeper.​

    Excited all over, Sisko strides further into the tunnels, his torch out before him, trying to find a way down.



    25 MONTAGE


    -- More hunting through tunnels.
    -- A lava tunnel angling down through rock. Sisko goes ahead eagerly; Luka follows rather more hesitantly.
    -- Sisko studying his compass device by fire light.
    -- More general trudging.
    -- Sisko helps Luka climb through a small gap in the rock.



    26 INT. B’HALA CAVES


    They reach the bottom of the tunnel, and there doesn’t seem to be anywhere else to go. Sisko holds out his compass, and looks around, frustrated.

    SISKO
    I can’t find a way to get any
    deeper than this. It’s solid
    bedrock underneath us. But
    it has to be here! I can feel it!

    LUKA
    You know what I do in times
    like this? I pray.

    SISKO
    All due respect, Luka, but I’m not
    sure that’s going to work.

    LUKA
    It doesn’t matter if it works.
    That’s not what praying’s for.​

    Sisko looks at him confused. Luka just smiles, amused, then takes a deep breath, closes his eyes, stands there silent. Meanwhile, Sisko returns to looking around with his torch, inspecting the walls, checking his scribbled notes.

    After a moment, Luka opens his eyes again, and smiles.

    LUKA
    “The Emissary shall search for the
    source. And he will keep the guide
    close, and together they will heed
    the lessons, and the spirit of Ohalu
    shall surround them both.”

    SISKO
    What?

    LUKA
    It’s right there in the book. All
    those symbols, so only someone
    who’d read the book could
    understand them.
    (looks around the cave)
    Thirty-thousand years. There is no
    grave, not anymore. How long ago
    must the body have decayed away,
    dissolved into dust?
    (a revelation)
    The spirit shall surround them.​

    With amazement, Sisko gets it. The puzzle solved, they stand together by the flickering light of their torches and gaze at the walls of stone around them.



    FADE OUT:



    END OF ACT FOUR​
     
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    ACT FIVE​



    FADE IN:



    27 INT. B’HALA CAVES



    The two flaming torches have been jammed into a crack in the ground by their bases, so that they stand up. Sisko and Luka sit on the ground nearby, almost like a campfire, sitting and pondering by the fire light.

    LUKA
    How many times have I read those
    words? Back to front, over and over,
    I know them by heart. I just assumed
    they were metaphor. But they were
    more literal than I could have ever
    imagined.

    SISKO
    From what little I know of him,
    Ohalu tended to keep the usual
    flowery language to a minimum.

    LUKA
    And the guide... Obviously the
    Emissary is you. But the guide...
    (w/ wonder)
    That’s me. Ohalu foresaw me.​

    Luka gazes into the flames, overcome with amazement at this concept. Sisko is glad to see him happy.

    LUKA
    All of this is Ohalu. All of it. All
    around us. Including me.
    (beat)
    Thank you, Benjamin. You’ve given
    me something I could never have
    dreamed of.

    SISKO
    I should be thanking you. You’ve
    given me someone I feel like I can
    talk to. That’s more than I’ve had
    in a long time.

    LUKA
    I’m glad I could help, in whatever
    small way.

    SISKO
    I’m just sorry it took Eivos’s death
    to bring us together.​

    Luka thinks a moment, then gets up to stand. He picks up a handful of sand from the ground, and gently casts the sand into the flames. The sand burns away in a quick flash.

    LUKA
    Eivos Calan, and Audj.​

    Sisko smiles, touched. He gets up to stand, grabs a handful of sand, and throws it into the flames.

    SISKO
    Eivos Calan, and Audj.​

    They take a moment to remember their mutual friend.

    SISKO
    So now, the question is... can we
    find our way out of here?

    LUKA
    (smile)
    I’m sure we can. ​

    Going off the flames of Sisko and Luka’s torches...



    28 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


    ...to the flames of the roaring fire in the Sisko household’s living room fireplace. It’s night outside, with a blustery wind audible. But inside it’s warm and secure.

    Jasmine is sat cross-legged on the floor, playing jacks and marbles with Rebecca. The little girl is in her jim-jams. Kasidy sits in the rocking chair watching them play, happy and relaxed, laughing along with them.

    After a while, the door opens, and Sisko re-enters. They all look up at him in some slight surprise.

    Rebecca jumps up and runs to her father in glee.

    REBECCA
    Daddy daddy! She’s human! Like me!

    SISKO
    She certainly is, sweetheart. ​

    Jasmine gets up too and approaches Sisko with her hand out to shake.

    JASMINE
    Good to see you again, Captain.

    SISKO
    You too, sergeant. Is there a problem?

    JASMINE
    Oh no, not at all.

    KASIDY
    Jasmine came by to update us on
    the investigation, and then we got
    to talking. Didn’t realise how late
    it had gotten.

    SISKO
    (to Rebecca)
    Late enough that little girls ought
    to be in bed.​

    Rebecca pouts and grabs onto Sisko tight, trying to be the perfect daddy’s girl. He prises her away again.

    KASIDY
    I think that sounds like an excellent idea.

    REBECCA
    Oh, mommy...

    KASIDY
    Come on, young lady. No arguing.
    Ben, would you...?​

    Sisko nods his agreement warmly, hefts Rebecca up with a giggle, and carries her off towards the bedrooms. With them gone, Jasmine pulls herself together.

    JASMINE
    Right, I should be off.

    KASIDY
    Thanks for coming, Jasmine. Are
    you sure you’ll be warm enough?
    I can lend you a coat...

    JASMINE
    I’ll be fine. Us trained security
    operatives are a hardy breed.​

    Kasidy opens the door for Jasmine to go, but hesitates.

    KASIDY
    Really, Jasmine... thanks. For listening.

    JASMINE
    My pleasure.

    KASIDY
    Do you think we could... I don’t
    know, meet up again some time?
    Try and teach Bajor how to make
    a good cup of tea?

    JASMINE
    I’d like that.​

    Jasmine pulls Kasidy into a quick half-hug, then turns and leaves. Kasidy closes the door behind her.



    29 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE - BEDROOM


    Last seen in 10x20 “In the Stars”. Kasidy quietly opens the door to find Sisko already there, preparing himself and the room for bed. Kasidy enters and begins doing the same.

    KASIDY
    Rebecca in bed already?

    SISKO
    She was tireder than she let on. ​

    Pulling the curtains.

    Folding down the bedspread.

    Stripping off the day clothes.

    Putting them in the laundry hamper.

    KASIDY
    She absolutely adores Jasmine. They
    were playing half the day.

    SISKO
    Good. It’s nice for her to meet
    other humans. ​

    Getting into bed clothes.

    Brushing teeth.

    Taking out hair pins and brushing it out.

    KASIDY
    I wasn’t sure I’d actually see you
    tonight.

    SISKO
    Well, the accommodations weren’t
    exactly luxurious. And it’s not so far
    away. Just a moment by transporter.​

    Moisturising face and hands. Rinsing out with mouthwash.

    KASIDY
    Do you want a hot drink or anything?
    Replicator’s still warm.

    SISKO
    No, thanks... it’s been a long day,
    and I’m tired. I just want to go
    to sleep.​

    So they do. They climb into bed.

    KASIDY
    So did you have a good time?

    SISKO
    Actually... yes. Met some good people.
    Talked about Eivos a lot. It was nice.

    KASIDY
    Are you going to go back?

    SISKO
    Yes... yes, I think I am.​

    Kasidy reaches up and clicks off the light over the bed. They both settle down into the covers, each facing outward.

    SISKO
    Night.

    KASIDY
    Night.​

    On SISKO, as he stares out into the darkness on his own side of the bed.

    On KASIDY, as she stares out into the darkness on her own side of the bed.

    A TOP VIEW of them both, in bed, in the dark, backs turned to each other, a yawning chasm between them.



    FADE OUT:



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  8. MartinOShea

    MartinOShea Ensign Newbie

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    Hello

    Are your DS9 season 8 and 9 scripts available at all?

    Thanks

    Martin O'Shea.
     
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    Hi Martin

    Seasons 8 and 9 are just adaptations of the existing novels. Season 8 is the parasites arc - Avatar to Unity. Season 9 is the WoDS9/MU arc - Unjoined to The Soul Key. That's why 10 picks up immediately after The Soul Key.

    I was never really comfortable uploading those scripts openly for everyone, because that would effectively be giving away those authors' work for free, which is probably illegal. But if you've read those stories, then you already know what happens, aside from some minor tweaks and necessary editing for space.

    On the other hand, if you've already bought and read the books, and you just want to see the adaptations, then I suppose that's fair enough. PM me and we can discuss it.

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    lvsxy808

    Unfortunately, it seems that because I'm a new member to this BBS, that I have to make a minimum of 50 posts before I can send/receive PMs.

    I would like to read your scripts though: so what do you suggest?

    Thanks

    Martin O'Shea.
     
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    Okay, well as soon as you can, PM me. I don't think either of us want to put our personal emails right in the thread, but in PMs is fine. Don't worry, they're not going anywhere.

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    I'm happy to provide a GMail account if you're content to send them to it?
     
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    DS9Continuing Rear Admiral Rear Admiral

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    If you're okay putting an address here, then yes, go for it. I only have seasons 8 and 9 as pdfs at the moment - I never got around to formatting them for ebook. I can do that but it would take me a bit longer to get through them all.

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  14. MartinOShea

    MartinOShea Ensign Newbie

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    If you can give me a day or two to set up a special email account, then .pdf files will be fine.

    Thanks. I happen to be London-based as well.
     
  15. MartinOShea

    MartinOShea Ensign Newbie

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    Would it be possible for you to send .txt or .pdf files for DS9 seasons 8 and 9 to: mrgraverol@gmail.com

    Thanks.
     
  16. DS9Continuing

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    On the way!

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