February 2012 Challenge: Dressing Down

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TheLoneRedshirt, Feb 6, 2012.

  1. TheLoneRedshirt

    TheLoneRedshirt Commodore Commodore

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    The theme for the February 2012 Challenge is "Dressing Down."

    And I'm not referring to casual Fridays.

    Your challenge is to write a story where a character (or characters) receives a severe "dressing down" - a scenario where the character(s) is confronted with an actual or perceived failure, slight, insult, miscommunication, insensitive behavior, etc.

    Possible scenarios . . .
    - A verbal reprimand by a superior officer
    - A spat between two people in a relationship
    - A confrontation between peers
    - A diplomatic faux pas

    Use your imagination. Make it awkward. Make it intense. Make it emotional. Or make it funny. Just make it within the following boundaries:

    • Story must take place in the vast realm of Star Trek - any era, canon or fanon.
    • 10,000 word limit
    • Must be your original work (plagiarists will receive a severe dressing down) :evil:
    • Must be NEW work - no re-runs of stories previously posted here or elsewhere.
    • Completed stories only. Please do not post installments / incomplete tales.
    • Post your story in a separate thread (identifying it as a challenge entry) and provide a link in this thread.
    • Deadline for submission - Wednesday, February 29, 8:00 p.m. Central Standard Time
    • Voting will take place March 1 - 4. More details at the time the polls open.
    Questions? You have but to ask. :) Good luck and good writing!
     
  2. Bry_Sinclair

    Bry_Sinclair Vice Admiral Admiral

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    Interesting TLR. I've just been struck with a nice little idea, if I can figure out how to do it justice.

    ::Toddles off to a dark room to ponder::
     
  3. Sandoval

    Sandoval Fleet Captain Fleet Captain

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    Is that a dark room in the photography sense or just a room that is dark?

    I need to know.
     
  4. sojourner

    sojourner Admiral In Memoriam

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    ^Both?
     
  5. Gul Re'jal

    Gul Re'jal Commodore Commodore

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    Hmm, I might have an idea for this one. Let's see if I can work out the details and find some time to write it.
     
  6. Bry_Sinclair

    Bry_Sinclair Vice Admiral Admiral

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    The latter.
     
  7. Count Zero

    Count Zero No nation but procrastination Moderator

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    Sounds like a very interesting idea and something that could create some good stories.
     
  8. Sandoval

    Sandoval Fleet Captain Fleet Captain

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    Unlikely.
    Much appreciated.
     
  9. Bry_Sinclair

    Bry_Sinclair Vice Admiral Admiral

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    Anytime Sandoval.

    Anyways, thinking I might test the waters with a character from my 23rd century civvie crew concept for this challenge. Just have to see how it develops.
     
  10. Bry_Sinclair

    Bry_Sinclair Vice Admiral Admiral

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    Here is my entry for this months challenge, featuring Rachel Keller (from the 23rd century civvie idea I have posted on the board). It deals with how her life in Starfleet came to an end, which ultimately led to her assuming command of the Ship.

    Enjoy!

    http://www.trekbbs.com/showthread.php?t=161074
     
  11. Count Zero

    Count Zero No nation but procrastination Moderator

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    Well, that was quick. :)
     
  12. Bry_Sinclair

    Bry_Sinclair Vice Admiral Admiral

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    I was bored at work :)
     
  13. Kyhrk

    Kyhrk Lieutenant Junior Grade Red Shirt

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    Been awhile since I posted here but this sounds like a fun challenge to write so I will see what I come up with.
     
  14. Dnoth

    Dnoth Fleet Captain Fleet Captain

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    I don't know if I'll do this or not... but when I first saw TNG:"The First Duty" when Picard dressed down Wesley, I felt like I was in trouble too. No one does it better than Picard! :)
     
  15. jespah

    jespah Taller than a Hobbit Moderator

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  16. TheLoneRedshirt

    TheLoneRedshirt Commodore Commodore

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    Just a little over a day left to post an entry for the February challenge. Deadline is February 29, 8:00 p.m. Central Standard Time.
     
  17. Cobalt Frost

    Cobalt Frost Captain Captain

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    Idea, I had; time, I had not. Maybe next month...

    Good reads this month! I'll be interested to see who wins.
     
  18. TheLoneRedshirt

    TheLoneRedshirt Commodore Commodore

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    The February Challenge is now closed. Thanks go to Bry_Sinclair and Jespah for entering.

    The voting thread will be up shortly.