Hi, I posted my first attempt at a Star Trek: Voyager fic on fanfiction.net. I plan to make it more chapters. Only have the first chapter up for now. Let me know your thoughts, what you like or dislike about it. It's my first attempt at a Star Trek fic. I'm a little...disappointed now...about the episode I chose to "redo". I think I am going to also start writing another Voyager fic with a different episode/time period as the basis. Anywho, check it out if you are a Voyager fan (It is a Janeway/Chakotay ship fic): http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9045556/1/A-New-Life
Angry Fanboy Welcome to the forum. You might get a better response if you also 'publish' your story here as a post. I've had a cursory look over it and it seems reasonably well written, but Chakotay watching a naked Janeway lather herself up in the bath isn't really my thing if I'm honest so I'll pass I'm afraid. All the best with your writing though.
Ok cool. Yeah like I wrote, unless you're a J/C fan, probably not for you. I'll be writing some others though that aren't so romance-centric.