The Dominion Triumphant: A Star Trek Dystopia

[Sandoval]

doublegoodprole wrote:

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I'll have to take your word for it. I haven't seen BSG so I can't really comment on the similarities.

Yeah, course you haven't.

It never fails to amaze me how many people "haven't seen" the episode or series that their fanfic is staggeringly similar to whenever that similarity is pointed out by others.

Not to worry though...

[doublegoodprole]

Nerys Ghemor wrote:

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I haven't read many stories lately on the TrekBBS fanfic forum--and I must say this is AWESOME.

And ignore Sandoval's "advice.' Your extension of the Weyoun-Dukat bickering that we saw on the show, and your deeper look into Dukat's psychology is incredibly well done. Not to mention that you've created quite a mystery here when it comes to how fast humanity surrendered. That past must somehow hold a key to the future. And frankly, I have much more trust that the events of the Alpha Quadrant will end up connected to those outside the galaxy.

Wow, thank you. Really high praise from a pretty accomplished writer. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

[Blip]

Sandoval wrote:

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Yeah, course you haven't.

It never fails to amaze me how many people "haven't seen" the episode or series that their fanfic is staggeringly similar to whenever that similarity is pointed out by others.

Not to worry though...

Wow. I bet you really take that whole "innocent until proven guilty" schtick to heart, huh?

As a counterpoint to certain condescending comments *ahem* I LOVED this, and can't wait for more. I have to admit I was bit concerned I'd come across one of those graphic fanw^nk lesbian slash fics at first (it was the Naked!Janeway scene, sorry) but that fear was rapidly overcome and I find myself enjoying this almost as much as Gibraltar's works. I especially loved your resolving the Demon World Voyager's fate!

So, moar!

[adm_gold]

Keep going! I like the two stories of post Earth Sol and the new colonies.

[Angry Fanboy]

doublegoodprole wrote:

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"I believe in coincidences. Coincidences happen every day. But I don't trust coincidences."

I hope you caught my tiny shout-out. Your Majestic story has really got me thinking lately.

Definitely too much of a leap to believe it's a coincidence - very intrigued to read more about it!

Thanks for the compliment, everyone has been so kind about Majestic!

[Sandoval]

Blip wrote:

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Wow. I bet you really take that whole "innocent until proven guilty" schtick to heart, huh?

I could care less what you think...

[Gibraltar]

This tale is complex, with believable, intricately drawn characters and a strong narrative that keeps the reader fully engrossed.

Damn fine work!

You’ve got me hooked, and I can’t wait to see where you take this marvelous story.

[Blip]

Sandoval wrote:

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I could care less what you think...

I'm very glad to hear it.

[Sandoval]

Blip wrote:

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I'm very glad to hear it.

I could care less what you're very glad to hear.

[Blip]

*sigh*

So in other words you do care at least a little, or you're just an illiterate fool who thinks his attempts at sniping are somehow witty and/or intelligent. FYI, they're not but I'm glad we've covered that now.


Moving on, when are we going to see an update?

[DanCPA]

When are we getting more story?

[Sandoval]

Blip wrote:

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*sigh*

So in other words you do care at least a little, or you're just an illiterate fool...

*sigh*

Is there any need to resort to such name calling? Such abuse wounds me deeply.

[Blip]

Perhaps if you didn't keep so clumsily attempting to bait me, you might experience it less.

[Sandoval]

Blip wrote:

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Perhaps if you didn't keep so clumsily attempting to bait me, you might experience it less.

That's a clumsy attempt at an apology for calling me unkind names. Not to worry though.

[Angry Fanboy]

Is there any more of this on the horizon?

I'd be interesting in reading more about the survivors escapades in this other galaxy.