RSS iconTwitter iconFacebook icon

The Trek BBS title image

The Trek BBS statistics

Threads: 143,172
Posts: 5,598,075
Members: 25,399
Currently online: 534
Newest member: BlueMoon

TrekToday headlines

Retro Review: When It Rains…
By: Michelle on Feb 27

Nimoy Dead At Eighty-Three
By: T'Bonz on Feb 27

Breaking news: Leonard Nimoy – ‘Mr Spock’ – dies aged 83
By: AntonyF on Feb 27

Hurley Passes
By: T'Bonz on Feb 26

USS Excelsior Model Coming Soon
By: T'Bonz on Feb 25

Hemsworth To Host SNL
By: T'Bonz on Feb 25

Quinto To Guest Star On HBO Comedy
By: T'Bonz on Feb 25

Wheaton To Voice Firefly Game
By: T'Bonz on Feb 24

Nimoy Health Scare
By: T'Bonz on Feb 24

Star Trek #42 Preview
By: T'Bonz on Feb 23


Welcome! The Trek BBS is the number one place to chat about Star Trek with like-minded fans. Please login to see our full range of forums as well as the ability to send and receive private messages, track your favourite topics and of course join in the discussions.

If you are a new visitor, join us for free. If you are an existing member please login below. Note: for members who joined under our old messageboard system, please login with your display name not your login name.


Go Back   The Trek BBS > Star Trek Fandom > Fan Fiction

Fan Fiction Other forums talk about Trek. We make it.

Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old May 27 2012, 03:18 PM   #1
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

Previously, on DS9 Season 10:

Original threads:

Episodes 1 to 7 (pdfs 1 2 3 4 5 6 7)
Episode 8 (pdf)
Episode 9 (pdf)
Episode 10 (pdf)
Episode 11 (pdf)
Episode 12 (pdf)
Episode 13 (pdf)
Episode 14 (pdf)
Episode 15 (pdf)
Episode 16 (pdf)
Episode 17 (pdf)
Episode 18 (pdf)
Episode 19 (pdf)

All episodes are also available at the Ad Astra fan-fic archives, link here.

Next up is part 1 of what is basically a three-part season finale - 10x20 - "In the Stars"



.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!

Last edited by lvsxy808; May 28 2012 at 08:21 AM.
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old May 27 2012, 03:25 PM   #2
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

.


TEASER


FADE IN:


1 INT. EVEN ODDS - BRIDGE


The camera SHAKES, computer panels SPARK, smoke BILLOWS. A burned, smudgy hand grabs urgently at the helm panel, pulling the body up it is DEZ, the Even Odds captain.

The ship shakes around him, under attack. He clambers back into the seat and quickly works the panels, desperately trying to get the ship out of harms way.

Another SLAM the ship shudders and rings like a bell as its hit again. Dez turns to look at FACITY, his buxom Wadi exec, at the science panels.

DEZ
Fac! I need to know where they
are! I cant get us away if

FAC
I dont know where they are!
They keep moving! Jumping around
like Rakhari springers. Every
time I think theres a gap we
can run through, they jump right
into it and shoot at us again.
I cant even tell if there is
a they or just an it.

The ship shakes again, a groan rumbling all through its spaceframe. Another panel blows. A couple of unfamiliar background faces are working other stations.

DEZ
What about Prees?

FACITY
(slaps comm panel)
Prees! Status!


2 THE WA


PREES, the Karemma engineer, staggers against the bucking ship. But thats the least of her worries, because the WA is erupting all around her. The peaceful cloudy white is gone, and instead the space is THROBBING with a fiery orange light, PULSING like an irregular heartbeat. The patches of colour that hang in mid-air are all on FIRE.

Prees dodges out of the way of one burst of flames and collapses to the ground, but even that shifts and rolls under her, physically reacting to the attack on the ship.

PREES
Im trying! But nothing works.
Its alive down here... and
its going crazy!



3 INT. EVEN ODDS - CORRIDOR


The dog-like Aarruri PIF runs as fast as he can down the corridor. He winces against his damaged leg, slowing him down, but he pushes through it and keeps going.

He skids around a corner into another section of corridor. BRAD, FEG and TRIV are pounding along it towards Pif. The hulking Dosi female carries a heavy fire extinguisher device, the two tiny Ferengi males lugging the long coiled pipe behind. Pif dodges around them and keeps going.

BRAD
Pif! Where are you going? Its
this way!

Pif ignores her and keeps running. A section of a bulkhead BURSTS off its moorings and out into the corridor, letting a finger of white-orange Wa material leak out, reaching and flowing. Pif ignores it. He runs and runs...


4 INT. EVEN ODDS PIFS QUARTERS


The door opens and Pif dashes in. Inside, on the large pillow of their bed, is Pifs wife SETT and their six tiny green babies. The puppies are a bit older now, old enough to be aware of whats going on around them. Sett is trying her best to hug them to her chest, comfort them, but they still whine and whimper in fear.

SETT
Pif! You shouldnt be here!

PIF
No, Sett. Youre my family. I
couldnt be anywhere else.

He jumps up onto the bed and huddles up with his family, curling himself around to protect them. Pif and Sett both look around in fear as the ship shudders again...

SETT
But who is it? Whos trying to
kill us?


5 EXT. SPACE


The freighter Even Odds tries to run, its patchwork hull damaged and burning and smoking. It tries to swerve...

An Ascendant ship JUMPS right into its path and FIRES. A massive jagged bolt of white electricity bursts from its pointed silver tip and SLAMS into the Even Odds.

CLOSE on the ships hull as the dissolving effect begins...


6 INT. EVEN ODDS - BRIDGE


Facity reacts to her panels with worry...

FACITY
The outer hull, its starting
to degenerate... just like Nog
and Shar said it would.

DEZ
Dont talk to me about those
damned Alphies! This is their
damned fault! We wouldnt be
under attack at all if I hadnt
let Jake guilt me into it.

Facity knows its not the time to argue.

FACITY
The hulls about to give...


7 EXT. SPACE


The Ascendant ship FIRES and FIRES on the Even Odds, the freighters skin dissolving more and more...

Thick blue phaser fire comes from off-side, pummelling the Ascendant ship. The Ascendant breaks off attack, looping away. The new attacker gives chase a JEMHADAR FIGHTER. Even Odds is left ignored for the moment.


8 INT. EVEN ODDS - BRIDGE


Amazed, Dez and Facity and the others watch the JemHadar and Ascendant ships exchanging fire on the main viewscreen. Panels and cables still burn and spark around them.

DEZ
Unbelievable.

FACITY
(w/ wonder)
Why does this keep happening
to us?

DEZ
Dont count your pegs. Its not
over yet.



9 EXT. SPACE


The JemHadar fighter pursues the Ascendant ship, firing on it constantly. The Ascendant JUMPS away, and the last few shots are lost.

But the JemHadar anticipate the Ascendants move. Even as the Ascendant JUMPS back into place right behind them, the JemHadar ship does a fast heel-turn, practically spinning itself 180 degrees until it faces the Ascendant again.

The JemHadar take the Ascendant by surprise with a new volley of phaser fire. Theyre practically at point-blank range, FIRING FIRING FIRING...

BOOM. Almost nose-to-nose, the Ascendant ship EXPLODES. The JemHadar fighter surges through the fire and out the other side, before swooping back around and steadily approaching the crippled Even Odds.


10 INT. EVEN ODDS - BRIDGE


Dez and Facity watch the JemHadar ship loom closer and closer, the field of Ascendant debris behind it. They tense - this could be good or bad. Maybe they were just fighting over who gets to kill them.

Theres an alert on Facitys panels she rushes to check.

FACITY
Incoming signal.

With a gulp, Dez nods. Facity presses controls...

And the screen changes to an image of TARANATAR. He stands on the JemHadar bridge wearing one of the viewer-headsets, with VANNIS visible behind him.

TARANATAR (screen)
Captain Dez. Facity.

FACITY
(amazed)
Taranatar...? What

TARANATAR (screen)
The Even Odds is now under the
protection of the Dominion, by
direct order of the Founders.

DEZ
Umm, thanks, I guess. But why?



11 INT. EVEN ODDS PIFS QUARTERS


The conversation is sounding through the entire ships comm system. Pif and Sett have their ears perked up, curious...

TARANATAR (comm)
JemHadar vessels have been
shadowing you for some weeks
now. This was the wish of the
Founder you call... Meera.

Pif and Sett both BARK loudly, excited and relieved and grateful. Picking up the mood, the puppies start to copy their parents with happy little YELPS and SQUEAKS.


12 INT. EVEN ODDS - BRIDGE


The Gaber familys happy barking sounds through the comm. Dez and Facity sag in blissful relief. They share a grin.

DEZ
(w/ feeling)
Taranatar, thank you. Youve
saved our lives - again. And
please pass on our thanks to
Meera if you see her.

TARANATAR (screen)
Do you require assistance? Can
you manoeuvre?

FACITY
Not as we are the main engines
are fried.

TARANATAR (screen)
Stand by. We will tractor you
to a repair facility.



13 EXT. SPACE


The JemHadar ship casts a tractor beam over the Even Odds.

CLOSE on the freighters hull with its skin half melted away, the tractor beam has an unexpected effect. Sparks and tiny explosions start spreading over its surface...


14 THE WA


Prees reacts with alarm as the formless material of the Wa goes haywire again. Electric bolts spark and jump around the room, the coloured patches transform into open MOUTHS and small BIRDS fly out of them, circling around.

PREES
(into comm)
Captain no! Stop the tractor
beam! The Wa is -

The Wa CONVULSES like a living animal trying to buck off an unwanted rider. Prees is knocked off her feet and one of the electric bolts catches her full-on...


15 INT. EVEN ODDS - BRIDGE


The rear wall of bridge consoles bucks and convulses too, sparks and fires spreading right to left approaching Facitys station. Dez runs to grab her...

DEZ
Facity, move -

But too late. The consoles EXPLODE. Dez and Facity are thrown back in a shower of sparks and flames...


BLACK OUT:

END OF TEASER


.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old May 27 2012, 03:34 PM   #3
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

.


ACT ONE


FADE IN:


16 EXT. SISKOS HOUSE


Spring, turning to summer. Warm breeze, gently wafting trees, green grass and golden stone. Mid-afternoon.


17 INT. SISKOS HOUSE - BEDROOM


SISKO sits cross-legged on the bed, with young REBECCA sat opposite him. Sisko is helping her to learn her ABCs. He holds up a card with a Bajoran ideogram on it...

SISKO
Do you remember what this one
is called?

REBECCA
...Shem?

SISKO
Nearly. Its a tough one. Try again...

REBECCA
(w/ difficulty)
Slem...

SISKO
Thats it! Good girl!

With a sigh Sisko puts down the cards and looks at Rebecca. He gazes into her face with a small frown. Thinking. His formerly happy smile slowly falls, a faade dropping away. His mind drifts. Rebecca wonders what changed...

REBECCA
Daddy?

SISKO
Its coming, Rebecca. I can
feel it. I know you dont know
what Im talking about. But
whatever it is... its coming.

He reaches out for Rebecca and pulls her close. Hugs her tight while he can. Kisses her head.

KASIDY (o.s.)
Ben? Ben! Jake and Rena just
arrived! Come and say hello.

Siskos worry does not ease. His mind cant let it go...


18 INT. SISKOS HOUSE LIVING ROOM


Sisko emerges from the bedroom with Rebecca hugged around his chest. JAKE and KASIDY are sat on the sofa, and laid out in front of them on the coffee table are some large charcoal-on-paper drawings, taken from Renas art bag.

JAKE
Hey, Dad!

SISKO
Hey, Jake-o...

KASIDY
Ben, come and look at these.
Rena drew them...

Sisko gently lowers Rebecca to the ground - she toddles off towards Mummy. He looks to the kitchen, just as RENA is emerging with a mug of steaming tea in each hand.

RENA
Hi, Mister Sisko...

Sisko gazes at her, his worry increasing...


FLASHBACK 4x03 THE VISITOR


Older Jake introduces his wife to his father...

ADULT JAKE
This is Korena... my wife.


BACK TO SCENE


Sisko blinks away the memory. But the worry stays.

SISKO
Rena...

JAKE
Dad, look. We had the morning
off today so we went up to Yyn.
Its always nice this time of
year, and its kind of... our
place, now. And Rena had been
looking for a new project...

By now Rena has delivered the teas, and Sisko has joined them in looking at the drawings.

RENA
So I started sketching some of
the ancient ruins there, the
statues and carvings. This is
what I came up with.

Sisko begins to slowly sift through the drawings, studying each one in turn. They depict the crumbling buildings, eroded statues and worn shapes, lovingly crafted in shades and lines of charcoal. Sisko stops at one in particular...

RENA
That was my favourite. Its a
single tall column, looked as
if it might have been a person
before it got eroded away. But
here, at the top...
(traces it
w/ finger)
...Im probably imagining it,
but it kinda looks like an
eye. Just one big eye, gazing
out at everyone.

Sisko studies the drawing. He looks up at Rena. Shes occupied, chatting MOS with Kasidy and Jake. But Sisko is staring at her. She worries him. He doesnt trust her.


19 SECURITY SCREEN


The image of ETANA, still sat in her security cell. Alone, withdrawn, sad. This image is relayed on the screens in...


20 INT. DS9 SECURITY OFFICE


RO LAREN sits in her chair, turned to look at the screens. She watches her friend in the cell. Shes not angry, not hateful, not upset. Just contemplative.

QUARK (o.s.)
So what are you going to do
with her?

ANGLE to reveal that QUARK sits in the other seat, watching Ro watching Etana. He gives her space, doesnt push.

RO
Dont know. Kira hasnt decided.

QUARK
Kira isnt the one she betrayed.

RO
No. But everyones sticking their
oar in because of the unique
circumstances. Kira, Vaughn,
Bashir... Richter of course...
theyre all having their say.

QUARK
What do you say?

RO
Dont know. Im not mad at her.
Maybe I should be. I usually
am in this kind of situation.
(pause to think)
With Taranatar... I couldnt
handle my feelings. I ran away
from them with the painkillers.
Etana is... kinda the same thing.
Yes, she betrayed me... hurt
me... but she didnt mean to.
(sad chuckle)
In a way, she helped. Forced me
to face up to what I was doing.
So, upshot is... I dont know.

Quark nods solemnly. The Promenade door opens, and VAUGHN enters. Ro stands to greet him.

RO
Quark... would you mind?

Quark gets the message leave us alone. He gets up, but with a comforting smile to Ro.

QUARK
You know where to find me.

And then hes gone. Ro gestures for Vaughn to sit.

RO
Thank you for coming, Commander.
(braces herself)
I asked to see you... to tell
you that Im afraid I wont be
able to work with you anymore.

Vaughn translates her words - shes talking about his anti-Section 31 group. The conversation continues on the surface but underneath they both know what theyre really saying. Vaughn composes himself, responds calmly and certainly.

VAUGHN
No.

RO
Commander, I think youd agree
that my recent actions... my
recent decisions... demonstrate
my unsuitability for the task
you assigned me.

VAUGHN
Lieutenant, I do not agree. As
I told you at the time, weve
all made our mistakes, and we
all have our issues. It doesnt
change our obligations.

Ro sees shes not getting through to him. She tries her best to explain, enunciating every word.

RO
Every step I take... it hurts.
Every thought I think... hurts.

VAUGHN
Lieutenant, I know you like to
think you have it worse than
everyone else. But I feel I must
point out that I have been doing
this job for longer than youve
been alive. Twice as long, in
fact. And Im still going. Your
desire to run away is exactly
that running away. Again. You
told me your reasons for taking
this assignment. Those reasons
still apply. You are entirely
capable of completing the task
to my satisfaction, and that is
an end of it.
(he stands)
Carry on, Lieutenant.

He turns and walks out. Ro considers what hes said...


21 INT. DS9 INFIRMARY


BASHIR and TARSES stand together in the Infirmary. Bashir is deferent and conciliatory. Tarses is unhappy, but civil.

BASHIR
Im really sorry, Simon. I know
this must be awkward for you.

TARSES
(lying)
No no, its fine, Doctor.

BASHIR
I cant really explain why, but
to be frank, my resignation was
fake. Captain Kira and Commander
Vaughn have offered me back the
CMO position... and I would like
to take it. Things that happened
while I was away made it clear
to me that this is what I want
to do. Where I feel like I ought
to be. But... I dont know where
that leaves you.

TARSES
Ill figure something out.

BASHIR
I would like you to stay. Until
we know whats going to happen
to Etana, well be a hand short
around here.
(sudden worry)
Not that Im talking about making
you a nurse. Your promotion still
stands. Nobodys taking that away
from you. But Id understand if
you decided to look for another
CMO position elsewhere.

TARSES
Ill figure something out.

BASHIR
Okay. Okay. So... what do we
have on for today?

TARSES
Not a lot. Ive made Ro promise
to come back for regular checks.
Dax and Prynn and Quark are all
healed. Unless theres any last
minute emergencies, thats it.

BASHIR
Good. Looks like youve got
everything under control.

TARSES
Yes, I do. Oh, before I forget...

Tarses reaches off and grabs a padd, hands it to Bashir.

TARSES
This came for you while you were
away. I guess whoever sent it
didnt realise youd resigned.
Or fake resigned, anyway.

Bashir looks at the padd it features GARAKs face.


CUT TO:


22 FLAMES


Crackling and burning hot. But not chaotic smooth and flowing against black night. Shapes begin to move across it, bodies blocking our view. OPEN OUT to...


23 EXT. ASCENDANT ENCAMPMENT - NIGHT


The Ascendant chief priest ESSK (10x12 Heresy) stands silently praying over the flames in an iron brazier. He
is troubled, but trying not to dwell on it too much.

Another figure approaches, joining him in prayer. Essk looks up it is BLAS, from 10x14 Against the Odds.

BLAS
Cardinal Essk. Blessings of the
True upon you.

ESSK
And on you, Archquester Blas.
How go the preparations?

BLAS
They proceed apace, Cardinal.
Archquester Raiq continues to
inspire the Knights to their
sacred duty. More children of
the True emerge from the stars
to join the Quest every turn.

ESSK
(small mutter)
Raiq... of course...

BLAS
Are you troubled, Cardinal?
Do you fear for the Quest?

Essk has to be very careful how he answers. He cant be seen to be disloyal. But still...

ESSK
It is not fear, Blas. Only...
curiosity. I cannot help but
wonder why Mistress Iliana
chose Raiq to lead this Quest.
She is an honest Knight,
dedicated and devoted to the
True. But she is only a Knight.

BLAS
Raiq leads the crusade against
the hated Eavoq and Bajorans,
yes. But only that. She plays a
purely martial role. You remain
Cardinal. You still guide the
spiritual life of the Knights.

ESSK
Is there a difference? Does our
doctrine not state clearly that
we fight for the glory of the
Unnameable Ones with our every
thought? That our prayers do
battle among the stars against
the prayers of infidels for the
honour of being heard by Them?

BLAS
That is our custom, Cardinal. To
pray to the True is to fight for
Them, and to fight is to pray.

ESSK
Exactly. And yet now, Mistress
Iliana elevates a simple Knight
to the glory of leading a great
crusade. The crusade that may
finally lead us into the Trues
light. And I... who have worked
and prayed and fought for three
hundred cycles to rise to the
role of Cardinal, leader of all
Ascendants across the stars...
I am left to pray alone by the
flames, while Raiq trains and
inspires... and leads. I find
that... curious. Nothing more.

BLAS
(cautious)
She is the Fire, Cardinal. The
Knights trust her. We have all
been taught to do so since our
first breath. You counselled
belief in the Fire every day
you have been Cardinal. You
cannot doubt her now.

ESSK
I never doubt! Never again say
such a thing, Blas. Never even
suggest it. To even entertain
such thoughts is high treason,
punishable by the stake.

But thats fear underneath the anger. The truth is, Essk does doubt, and he also knows the potential punishment.

BLAS
(bows head)
I beg forgiveness, Cardinal.

ESSK
I grant it. My concern is for
the Knights, Blas. I wonder if
perhaps the Mistress Iliana does
not... understand the Ascendants
as well as she might. To fight is
to pray, and to pray is to fight.
These have been our ways for
thousands of cycles. She seeks
to change them, at a time when
we ought to be holding faster
to them than ever. And perhaps
that is my failing. If I had
helped her to understand...
(beat)
But I also wonder if perhaps
she cannot understand us. She
is, after all... not one of us.
She has not suffered what we
have suffered. She cannot know
the real, burning heart of the
Trues chosen people.

BLAS
She knows the True themselves.
She came to us from them. That
is a greater truth than any
Ascendant can possibly know.
(reassuring)
Do not be troubled, Cardinal.
The Knights will follow the
Fire, with no doubt in their
hearts. This is also our way.
(beat)
Blessings of the True upon you.

With this traditional parting, Essk bows his head, allowing Blas to leave. Essk is left alone over the flaming brazier again. His worry has not abated. If anything it increased. He mutters into the flames...

ESSK
Yes... this is our way.

On Essks troubled features, the lights of the flickering flames reflecting off his silver skin...


FADE OUT:


END OF ACT ONE


.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old May 27 2012, 03:45 PM   #4
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

.


ACT TWO


FADE IN:

24 INT. SISKOS HOUSE - KITCHEN


A gorgeous sunny day, sunlight streaming in. Rena stands gazing out of the kitchen window at the meadows, the large central tree waving gently. She smiles, comfortable here.

She turns her attention back to the sink in front of her, washing up after the family had an afternoon snack.

SISKO (o.s.)
What are you doing here?

She turns, surprised. Sisko is standing against the wall, arms folded, watching her. Studying her. Inspecting her.

RENA
Just getting these plates and
cups washed up. My grandfather
always said your guests should
feel comfortable in your home,
but should never take advantage.

She carries on washing. But Sisko isnt done.

SISKO
I mean what are you doing here,
in my house? Who are you?

RENA
I... dont understand.

SISKO
You confuse me, Azeni Korena.
I dont like feeling confused.

Rena is a little thrown by this conversation. Sisko is starting to creep her out. But the moment is broken when Jake enters the room, oblivious. Jake goes to Rena, pecks her on the cheek, and grabs a cloth from the sink.

JAKE
Crumbs on the sofa. Sorry.

Jake heads back out again. Sisko lets it go for now with a last worried glance at Rena, he turns to join Jake in the living room. Mystified, Rena returns to the washing up.


25 INT. DS9 MAIN OPS CENTRE


The office doors open and KIRA strides out, heading down the stairs to the central Ops table. DAX is running the boards as usual, with NOG at engineering, SHAR at sciences, BOWERS at tactical and VAUGHN strolling amiably around.

KIRA
Everything under control?

DAX
Yup.

KIRA
Taranatar back yet?

DAX
Youd know if he was, Captain.

Kira is nervous, for some reason. Nothing massive, just the kind of drumming the fingers, what-shall-I-do-with-myself uncertainty. Dax smirks at Kiras discomfort.

Then Daxs panels light up with a new ALERT. She checks, nods. Smiles at Kira.

DAX
Neutrino levels rising. Looks
like you were just in time.

KIRA
(nods, relaxing)
On screen.



26 EXT. SPACE THE WORMHOLE


The wormhole bursts open in its customary colourful display Dominion Vessel 288 emerges. It moves slowly, carefully, dragging another ship behind it by tractor the Even Odds.

The two ships are arranged awkwardly, so that the tractor beam does not attach to any damaged portion of the hull.


27 INT. DS9 MAIN OPS CENTRE


The crew react to this sight on the screen with some mild surprise. Dax checks readings on her panels...

DAX
Its Vanniss ship alright. But
I dont recognise the other one.
The transponder ID says its

NOG
Thats the Even Odds!

KIRA
What? Your spy ship?

NOG
Yes, sir! Only it looked a lot
better the last time I saw it.

BOWERS
(off panels)
Its had major weapons damage.
Engines blown, hull compromised,
shields non-existent, defence
systems ruined...
(w/ horror)
...Ascendant weapon signatures.

KIRA
Oh, kosst.

DAX
Hail from Vanniss ship.

At Kiras nod, Dax puts the call on the screen. Vannis appears, wearing the head-set, with Taranatar visible behind her, and also OPAKA lingering politely.

VANNIS (screen)
Greetings, Captain. As you can
see, we have guests. Their ship
is in need of major repairs and
there are substantial medical
concerns among its crew.

Nog and Shar share a worried look...

KIRA
(into action)
Dax - get them a docking port
and tell Bashir and Tarses to
get there fast. Bowers, Shar,
Nog I want a full tactical
work-up on what happened to
them and how to fix it. Vaughn,
liaise with Ro and Taranatar
on any security issues.
(back to Vannis)
Thanks for your help, Vannis.
See you in a few. Kira out.

The screen goes back to the external view of the Dominion ship and the Even Odds.

KIRA
Alright, everyone. Get to it.

NOG
Captain? Permission to put a
call through to Bajor... We
should tell Jake.

Kira realizes hes right. She nods her permission. Nog turns to his panels...


28 EXT. DEEP SPACE NINE


As Vanniss ship settles onto the docking ring next to the Defiant, and work bees gently tractor the damaged Even Odds onto the next port along.


29 INT. DS9 DOCKING RING CORRIDOR


At the first airlock, a full medical team including Bashir, Tarses and RICHTER is in action. They oversee as non-coms guide anti-grav stretchers out of the ship and into the corridor. The stretchers carry unconscious Even Odds crew Dez, Facity, GLESSIN and others. Brad follows them into the corridor, sniffling away tears.

The medical team moves off down the corridor. Once they clear, a team of Shar and TRB, Bowers and ALECO, and engineers LEISHMAN and CANDLEWOOD board the freighter.

At the next airlock along, Vaughn and Ro wait for the door to roll open. Vannis, Taranatar and Opaka step out into the corridor, escorted by two JemHadar soldiers.

VAUGHN
Ambassador, welcome back.

TARANATAR
Thank you, Commander. I should
report to the Captain.

VAUGHN
Ill tell her youre coming.

Taranatar nods simply, and heads off. Vannis slips in alongside him, supporting him without a word. Ro exchanges a glance with Vaughn wish me luck and follows them. Vaughn turns to Opaka, and warmly takes her hands.

VAUGHN
Sulan what a pleasant surprise.
I had no idea you were coming.

OPAKA
Its wonderful to see you again
too, Elias. But I cannot stay.
Vedek Yevir has asked to see me.

VAUGHN
Yevir? What does he want?

OPAKA
He wasnt prepared to say over
subspace. But he did say it was
a matter of vital importance.

VAUGHN
Isnt everything a matter of
vital importance to him?
(chuckle)
Ill arrange a ship for you.

They smile, glad to be in each others company. But Opaka is too spiritual and Vaughn is too professional to take it any further. He leads her down the corridor...


30 THE WA


The formless space in the belly of the Even Odds looks dead, or at least inactive. The white is a lifeless dull grey, the coloured splotches seeming to droop listlessly.

A hole opens in the middle, revealing the turbolift and PRYNN inside it. She steps out, and the hole disappears behind her. She spots Shar scanning with his tricorder.

PRYNN
Shar? Trb said you were down
here. I heard what happened...

SHAR
Prynn, hello. The situation is
definitely not good - the Wa
seems to be inactive.

PRYNN
Is it dead?

SHAR
I dont believe so. Its energy
levels are very low, but it is
already showing limited signs
of repairing itself.

PRYNN
This is our fault, isnt it? The
Ascendants attacked them
because of us.

SHAR
We do not know that for certain.
But it does seem likely. I found
the translation equipment I gave
to Prees they were listening
to the Ascendant comm channels
just before they were attacked.

PRYNN
And the Ascendants realized we
were ear-wigging. Wheres Nog?

SHAR
Trying to contact Jake and Rena.



31 INT. DS9 KIRAS OFFICE


Kira stands behind her desk, all business.

KIRA
Did you get in touch with him?

ANGLE to reveal Taranatar and Vannis opposite her...

TARANATAR
Not directly, Captain. Even with
the return of a third Founder,
the Link remains overwhelmed. I
was unable to speak with Odo in
person, only to leave a message
with the Vorta Weyoun.

KIRA
You have to keep trying. I didnt
go through all this to be foiled
by a Dominion answering service.

VANNIS
We had every intention, Captain.
Then we received the distress
call from the freighter ship.
Protection of that vessel was
also the Founders wish. The
Ambassador assured me that it
would also be your wish.

KIRA
Okay. Yes, youre right. Thank
you. Its just that its one
thing to agree to the alliance
in principle. We need to make
it happen in practice as well.

TARANATAR
Perhaps if you were to return to
the Link with us. Your presence
might... catch Odos attention.

Kira takes that on board... he might be right.

SHAR (comm)
chThane to Captain Kira.

KIRA
Go ahead, Shar.

SHAR (comm)
Could you come to the Even Odds
please, Captain? Theres some-
thing I think you ought to see.

She frowns thats a bit worrying.

KIRA
Ill be right there. Kira out.
(back to T and V)
Thank you, Ambassador, Vannis.
If youll excuse me.

Taranatar and Vannis nod their acceptance, and all three head out to Ops.


32 INT. SISKOS HOUSE LIVING ROOM


Kasidy sits on the couch with Rebecca. Sisko is trying not to pace the room. Shes seen him agitated like this before its fine, itll pass. Theyre both waiting for word...

The door from the office opens and Jake and Rena emerge.

KASIDY
What did Nog say?

JAKE
Its the Even Odds. My friends
from the Gamma Quadrant. They
were attacked. Theyre at the
station now.

KASIDY
Who attacked them?

RENA
The Ascendants.

Siskos head snaps up in alarm at that...

JAKE
I should go. I should be there.

RENA
Ill come with you.

SISKO
(quiet, menacing)
Youre not going anywhere.

The others all look at Sisko, confused and wary. Theres a bit of a stand-off as a result of the strange statement. Jake tries to keep the peace...

JAKE
Dad, what are you talking about?

SISKO
Im talking about your wife.
I want to know who she is and
what shes doing here.

RENA
Mister Sisko, Im not sure

SISKO
You. You married my son in an
alternate future timeline that
nobody but me even remembers.
And then you turn up here. You
marry my son all over again.
But where did you come from? I
get back from the wormhole, and
there you are, all of a sudden.
And in a matter of weeks youve
got Jake tied around your finger
and youve wormed your way into
my home. I want to know why.

KASIDY
(amazed)
Ben, what has gotten into you?

JAKE
Come on, Rena. Were leaving.

Jake is firm, annoyed at his dad. Rena is a little scared. Kasidy is just confused. As Jake begins to lead Rena to the door, Sisko steps forward, blocking their way.

SISKO
I said youre not going anywhere.
Not until I get some answers.

JAKE
Dad

Determined, Sisko grabs for Rena, holding both her arms so she cant move. She flinches back, scared of him. He hisses his question at her, obsessed with this.

SISKO
Who are you? Why are you here?
What do you want with us?

KASIDY
Ben, let go of her!

SISKO
No! Its all coming, its all
starting right now, and shes
a part of it! I need to know!

Jake steps between them, physically pushing his father back, forcing him to let go. But Sisko isnt giving up that easy. He looms forward, threateningly...

SISKO
Step out of my way, Jake.
(re Rena)
This thing -

But Sisko doesnt get to finish the sentence, because Jake PUNCHES him in the face. Rena and Kasidy YELP with shock. Sisko staggers back, stunned that his son would hit him. Jake is furious, seething. Weve never seen him angrier.

JAKE
Never talk about my wife like
that. Never. Do you hear me?

Sisko seems to have finally realized what he was doing. The punch has woken him up. He sputters, trying to apologise...

SISKO
Jake, I... Rena...

JAKE
Dont even bother. Come on,
Rena. Were leaving, now.

Jake grabs Renas hand and leads the poor confused girl out of the front door of the house. Theyre gone. Sisko stands there, trying to understand what just happened. He looks over to Kasidy for comfort, understanding...

But Kasidy is clinging tightly to baby Rebecca, and looking at him with horror. When he takes a step closer to her, she actually flinches back, pulls the baby away from him.

KASIDY
Benjamin Lafayette Sisko, get
out of this house. And you had
better get your damned head on
straight before you ever come
back into it.

Sisko is stunned at what has happened here. He got carried away, and hes being punished for it. And he knows theyre right to do it. That he could do anything to make his own wife and child afraid of him...

Without a word, he walks to the back door and out of the house. Down the steps, into the fields, and gone.

Left alone now, Kasidy slumps to the sofa, holding Rebecca tight, and begins to softly cry.


33 INT. DS9 DOCKING RING CORRIDOR


Shar and Prynn are waiting outside the airlock that leads to the Even Odds. Kira walks up to them...

KIRA
Shar? Prynn? Whats going on?
Shar holds up the padd in his hand.

SHAR
I was able to retrieve some of
the comm chatter from the Even
Odds recording of the Wa.

KIRA
Okay. What does it say?

SHAR
Captain, you should understand
that this came in after the
attack. After Taranatar saved
them and brought them here.

KIRA
Shar, what does it say?

SHAR
(deep breath)
It says, Nerys, press black.

A personal message, direct to her. Kiras face falls as she absorbs the shock...


34 THE WA


Kira stands alone in the Wa. It looks a little healthier now, healing itself. Shes staring daunted at one of the coloured smudges this one is a solid black.

What will she find on the other side? Only one way to know. She reaches out, her fingers swim into the colour...

The environment changes subtly. The wall in front of her seems to solidify and clarify, becoming like a mirror.

And standing opposite Kira, her mirror image, is ILIANA. Her Cardassian double smiles warmly to see her.

ILIANA
Hello, Nerys.

On Kiras reaction...


FADE OUT:

END OF ACT TWO


.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old May 27 2012, 03:54 PM   #5
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

.


ACT THREE



FADE IN:

35 EXT. ASCENDANT ENCAMPMENT - NIGHT


WIDE SHOT of the Ascendant encampment in the black ossified natural amphitheatre formation under a permanent night sky. The impromptu town of tents and pavilions has grown as more Ascendants come to join the crusade. It now fills the entire bowl shape to the brim, even overflows at points.

There are bunks for sleeping, canteens for food, workshops for armour and weaponry. The Knights themselves train or pray in groups wherever they find space. Iron braziers glowing with flames serve for both lighting and prayer.

Around the very edge of the black bowl, we see the shining silver darts of their ships thousands of them packed in tightly. And in the very centre, grander and more secure than any other, is Ilianas pavilion.

CLOSE on Cardinal Essk, as he dashes between the various structures and milling Ascendants. He is worried, urgent. He dodges past flames and practise-dueling Knights, frantic to get where hes going. That being...

...an Ascendant ship, on the outskirts of the encampment. Its canopy is open and Iliana sits in the pilots seat. RAIQ stands by her side, guiding and teaching Iliana how to use the controls. Essk runs up to them, tries his best to compose himself. He shouts up to the two women.

ESSK
Mistress! I heard rumours that
you were training to fly our
vessels. Are you leaving us?

ILIANA
(dismissive)
Of course not, Cardinal. I just
thought I would like to get out
there and see the stars. Look
at them! Arent they beautiful?

She smiles up at the night sky. Essk sputters to respond...

ESSK
Of course, Mistress. But they
are also fraught with dangers.
Do you not wish an escort?

ILIANA
(chuckle)
You have no idea of the things
Ive faced in my time, Essk. Of
the things Ive done. Im quite
sure I can take care of myself.

ESSK
Nevertheless, Mistress, I must
protest. The Final Ascension
approaches, by your own words.
You should be here, with us.

ILIANA
(cold, sharp)
Have some dignity, Cardinal. I
will do whatever I please, and
the supposed High Priest of the
Ascendants will not whine in my
ear like a baby about it. Now
get out of my way.

Shocked and insulted but covering it, Essk bows and backs away a few steps. Iliana nods to Raiq beside her...

ILIANA
Thank you, Raiq. Im sure this
will be fine.

Raiq also bows her head and manoeuvres down the side of the vessel to the ground. Iliana works the controls, the canopy closes, and the ship rises smoothly off the ground. Theres no whoosh of engines or visible exhaust it just lifts as if my magic, turns gracefully and zooms off into the dark.
Raiq begins to turn away, but Essk calls after her angrily.

ESSK
Archquester Raiq. I am your
Cardinal and you will show
me the respect I am due.

Raiq turns languidly back to Essk. She bows her head, acts deferent and proper on the surface. But the snide attitude underneath it is unmistakable.

RAIQ
I beg forgiveness, Cardinal.

Essk does not grant it.

ESSK
Explain to me, Archquester, why
Mistress Iliana has taken you
a mere Knight - to her bosom, as
if you deserve the honour, while
I am belittled and abandoned.

RAIQ
I would not presume to speak the
Mistresss mind, Cardinal. I only
know she came to us from the True,
and it is our duty to follow her.

ESSK
I lead the Ascendants, Raiq. Not
her. And not you. Remember that.

RAIQ
(innocent)
She is the Fire... is she not?

A challenge to his authority. Essk tenses, incensed.

ESSK
You are dismissed, child.

Raiq bows her head and backs away. Essk is left fuming.


36 EXT. SPACE


Ilianas borrowed ship gracefully slips through open space. Even at such high warp it seems practically effortless.

After a few moments, the ship drops out of warp and glides to a halt. There is nothing else around, no other ships or planets. Just the tiny silver dart on its own.


37 INT. ASCENDANT VESSEL


No larger than a standard shuttlecraft, with barely room for two occupants, one behind the other. The panels inside are seamless silver, like the outside. Iliana waves a hand over one area, an amorphous black smudge on the shiny surface a smaller version of what weve seen in the Wa.

The vessel reacts with a ripple effect across its internal surfaces. The piloting panels become less pronounced, less important. The rear bulkhead slowly grows in brightness, the white light of the Wa shining through. But the mirror surface is as yet uncertain, undefined. And unoccupied.

Iliana waits in her seat, gazing out of the window at the stars. Shes content, unhurried. After a while, the rear bulkhead ripples again, the light becoming brighter, the mirror becoming clearer. A message is coming through.

Iliana stands. She dives her fingers into the black smudge on the panel, and the mirror completes it transformation. There on its other side, is Kira. Iliana smiles warmly.

ILIANA
Hello, Nerys.

Kiras face falls as she realises who shes dealing with.

KIRA
Iliana... where are you?


INTERCUT WITH:

38 THE WA


Kira stands in the Wa, talking to Iliana across the mirror.

ILIANA
Im in an Ascendant ship...
(shrug)
...somewhere. I have to hand you
this one, Nerys. Finding an old
abandoned ship, disguised as a
freighter... using it to listen
in on us? Very clever. Kudos, I
believe is the human word.

KIRA
Ill make sure to pass on your
appreciation. If any of them
are still alive, that is.

ILIANA
(cheerful)
Oh, that wasnt me. The Knights
tracked down an echo in the...
something. I dont really know,
I wasnt paying attention. I
only heard about the attack
after the fact. Guess it was
lucky your new Dominion friends
came along when they did.

KIRA
(cagey)
What are you talking about?

ILIANA
Seriously, Nerys. You think I
dont know all about it? But it
doesnt bother me. Make your
alliances, it doesnt change
anything. Besides, Im thrilled
the freighter survived. I was
worried I wouldnt have chance
to talk to you before the end.

KIRA
You seem awfully confident this
is going to be the end.

ILIANA
Well of course I am. My mission
was ordained by the Prophets,
dont you remember? You were
there. You heard them say it
yourself. I am the Fire.

KIRA
And Im supposed to believe that
means youre destined to win?

Ilianas cheerful demeanour shifts to cold and taunting.

ILIANA
I will complete my mission,
Nerys. Theres simply nothing
you can do about that.

KIRA
Yes, there is. Ill stop you.

ILIANA
How? No, really how?

KIRA
Im the Hand of the Prophets.

Iliana breaks into raucous laughter. It worries Kira.

ILIANA
Dont you know what that means?
(beat)
You dont, do you? Well, I hope
you havent been placing all
your hopes on that, Nerys. Sisko
told the Prophets that you were
his right hand. Thats all.
Thats why they call you that.



FLASHBACK 9x20 SLAVE


Kira has just woken up in the Infirmary, after her heart replacement. Sisko sits by her bed, holding her hand.

SISKO
What good would I be without
my right hand?

The phrase reminds Kira of what the Prophets called her...


BACK TO SCENE


Kira tries to remain defiant. But what Iliana is saying has shaken her she did believe it was something special.

KIRA
It doesnt matter why They call
me Their Hand. It means They
have a role for me to play.

ILIANA
Oh, they do. Its called blunt
instrument. Youre not my equal,
Nerys. Youre literally half of
what I am. Sisko hes my equal.
Hes the Emissary... Im the
Emissary. You... youre just
his assistant.

Kira is being shaken, much as she might not want to be...


39 EXT. BAJOR - FIELDS


Moving towards dusk now, but still warm, a pleasant summer evening. Fields of corn and vegetables, farms and pastures.

Sisko treads along a winding country road between these fields. He looks out at the scenery, utterly untouched by it.

A motorised truck rumbles past him along the road, the back filled with happy, raucous Bajoran teenagers drinking and partying. Sisko watches them go. Their happiness means nothing to him. He has been cast out. He keeps walking.


40 EXT. SPACE


A small Bajoran personal shuttle zooms up into orbit, leaving the glittering green seas of Bajor behind.


41 INT. BAJORAN SHUTTLE - COCKPIT


Like the ones Jake and Taranatar both flew into the Gamma Quadrant. Jake sits in the pilot seat, Rena beside him. Jake is clearly still angry with his father.

JAKE
I get it, hes the Emissary. He
gets visions, or whatever. Ive
grown up with it for the last ten
years, I know he gets carried away
sometimes. But this is too far.

He turns to Rena, expecting her to agree. But shes quiet, thoughtful.

JAKE
Why arent you angrier?

RENA
Because I know he must have had
a reason. Hes the Emissary.

JAKE
He grabbed you. He hurt you. He
called you a thing.

RENA
Jake, theres something you have
to understand about Bajorans.
From the first story our parents
read to us as a little baby, we
learn about the Emissary. Hes
part of our culture, our shared
consciousness as a people. We
trust him, because we know he is
our direct link to the Prophets.

JAKE
I know all of that.

RENA
No, I dont think you do. At
least not like I know it. Jake,
my generation is the first for
who the Emissary is more than
just a story. Hes real. He
walks among us, and he has done
for almost my whole life. I can
see him and hear him, even touch
him. Do you have any idea what
thats like for us... for me?

Rena makes good points, forcing Jake to think about them.

RENA
So I forgive him. And I would
think that being your father
would entitle him to the same
understanding from you.

JAKE
It doesnt. It makes it worse.

Jake drives the shuttle onwards...


42 EXT. SPACE


Jakes shuttle continues on its way. In the far distance, slowly growing closer, is the distinctive shape of DS9.

A slight shift sideways in space, and now we see another ship coming towards us, away from the station - a Starfleet runabout. It crosses paths at a safe distance from Jakes shuttle and we turn, to watch it zoom towards the planet.


43 EXT. BAJOR - MONASTERY


Establishing the large monastery in Bajors capital...


44 INT. ASHALLA MONASTERY GARDEN - EVENING


The internal garden area where we have seen vedeks and kais meet before. Vedek YEVIR and Kai SOLIS are already there, strolling gently around the paths, inspecting the plantings and sculptures. They turn together at the sound...

...of Opaka entering the garden. She bows her head at the high company Yevir and Solis both do likewise to her.

OPAKA
Vedek... Your Eminence.

SOLIS
Please, Sulan, do not bow your
head to me. You are far more
eminent than I will ever be.

YEVIR
(warmly)
Eminences, then. Thank you
both for agreeing to meet with
me. I hope it was no trouble?

OPAKA
(smirk to self)
Once Commander Vaughn heard how
important it was, he insisted
on assigning a pilot and one of
their runabouts to bring me.

YEVIR
Kai Solis, do you have the book?

SOLIS
The original book of Ohalu, yes.

Solis holds up an ancient bound tome the book of Ohalu.
Yevir brings two more items out from his robes.

YEVIR
Thank you. I have brought two
equally important artefacts...
the jevonite figurine, found at
BHala, as the book was. And
this a letter from Elim Garak.

OPAKA
Vedek... what is this about?

YEVIR
We three have worshipped the
Prophets all our lives. Yet in
recent years, we have all three
walked different paths. You,
Opaka Sulan, have lived among
the Eavoq. Solis follows the
path of Ohalu. And I... I went
to Cardassia and learned the
Oralian Way. I asked you here
today to explain what I have
finally come to understand.

SOLIS
Which is?

YEVIR
That they are all the same.

Ending on Yevirs beatific smile...


FADE OUT:

END OF ACT THREE


.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old May 27 2012, 04:05 PM   #6
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

.


ACT FOUR



FADE IN:


45 EXT. BAJOR SURFACE BHALA


Establishing the archaeological dig at the ancient city...


46 INT. BHALA CAVES


The warrens and excavated spaces of the buried city. Its been more than five years since the city was uncovered, and more and more has been revealed, Bajoran iconography and ancient statues. Artificial lights are strung up, and monks and prylars work painstakingly by them to reveal yet more.

Prylar EIVOS (last seen 8x06 Fallout) steps along one of the opened passages towards us, calling out.

EIVOS
Emissary! This is a wonderful
surprise! Welcome to BHala.

The workers look up in muted awe. They know he doesnt like to be gawked at, but still this is the Emissary.

Sisko plods slowly along, gazing absently at the excavated walls. Eivos can instantly see that Sisko is troubled, but chooses not to draw attention to it.

SISKO
Hello, Prylar Eivos.

EIVOS
You must call me Calan, Emissary.
I had no idea you were coming.

SISKO
No... I was just walking. Ive
been walking for hours. And I
seemed to just... end up here.

EIVOS
Were all honoured to receive
you, Emissary, of course. How
can we help?

SISKO
Im so tired... and confused.
I could use a quiet place to
rest. And there was clarity
here, once before...

EIVOS
Then I know exactly the place.
The bantaca chamber is empty.
Ill find a bed roll and Ill
make sure youre not disturbed.

Sisko just nods, relieved and grateful that somebody is willing to take care of him and not ask questions. He follows Eivos back down the passage...


47 THE WA


As Kira talks to Iliana in the Wa...

KIRA
Why did you bring me here?
Why go to all the trouble of
making a call halfway across
the galaxy? What do you want?



INTERCUT WITH:


48 INT. ASCENDANT VESSEL


As Iliana talks to Kira in the cockpit of her ship...

KIRA (cont)
The Ascendants cant be very
happy about you chatting with
the enemy.

ILIANA
Oh, dont worry yourself about
that, Nerys. Theyre easily
distracted. I called because
I wanted to offer some advice.

KIRA
Advice. From a madwoman like you.

ILIANA
Take revelation wherever you can
get it, Nerys. Now listen. Dont
try to stop us from reaching the
wormhole. Trust me. Youll only
make it harder on yourself.

As Kira reacts stoically to that...


49 INT. ASHALLA MONASTERY GARDEN - EVENING


Opaka and Solis are now sat on one of the stone benches in the garden, as the sky turns towards night. Yevir stands in front of them, passionate and excited about his subject.

OPAKA
Linjarin, please. I do believe
that the religions of all worlds
contain their own fragment of a
much larger truth. But to claim
that such disparate faiths are
in fact the same faith...

YEVIR
I know. I had trouble grasping
it myself at first. But the
evidence is undeniable. Here
(re Garaks padd)
-in this letter, Mister Garak
describes a spiritual awakening
he recently experienced. You may
have heard of the Vinculum, an
aspect of the Oralian Way they
described as a nexus, another
plane of existence that cuts
through past, present and future,
where everything is connected. I
have come to believe that what
they are actually describing...
is our own Celestial Temple.

Opaka and Solis sit quietly. How to be polite here...?

SOLIS
That seems a remarkable jump of
deduction, Vedek.

YEVIR
I was there, when Garak first
recovered the records of the
Vinculum from the Oralian ruins
at Gardat. I said then that it
bore similarities to the faiths
of other worlds. But I didnt
realise at the time how similar...
Garak describes encountering the
images of friends and family,
be they alive or dead. And that
those images conveyed messages
of wisdom and peace. We have
all encountered the Orbs of the
Prophets does that not sound
like our own Orb Experiences?

OPAKA
Perhaps...

YEVIR
Garak also describes the image
of Oralius itself. He calls the
figure...
(reads from padd)
A shape of pure white, but soft,
tall and thin, with one warm and
smiling eye at its top, and many
pinkish ribbons for limbs, which
it used to embrace the Hebitians.

On Opaka as she remembers...


FLASHBACK 8x23 RISING SON


Meeting Itu the Eavoq for the first time. The tall, white alien embraces Opaka close with his thin ribbon limbs...


BACK TO SCENE


Opaka is dumbstruck as she realizes what Yevir is saying...

OPAKA
Oralius... was an Eavoq?

As Opaka tries to absorb this...


50 THE WA


Where Kira continues her conversation with Iliana...

KIRA
You cant seriously expect me to
give up. Were going to fight
you, and were going to win.

ILIANA
Of course I dont really expect
that. I know you better than
any being in existence, Nerys,
because I am you. But it was
worth a shot. I dont actually
want to see you die.

KIRA
Considering you were prepared to
tear apart the whole of creation
to get me less than a year ago,
I have my doubts about that.

ILIANA
That was the old me. Since we
last met, Ive become... whole.
Just like I told you I would. I
understand now. Im Bajoran, Im
Cardassian, Im Ascendant... and
it all fits together. Everything
is connected, Nerys. Even you.

Kira shakes her head, refusing to believe. Iliana smiles.

ILIANA
You dont see it, do you? The
patterns. The connections.

KIRA
I know the Ascendants worship
the Prophets... or at least
their version of the Prophets.
Just like the Eavoq do. And
like I do.

ILIANA
Youre missing one.



51 INT. BHALA CAVES


The excavated cave that contains BHalas grand bantaca spire, just as Sisko discovered it in 5x10 Rapture. Now he lies at the base of it, curled up on a bedroll, alone. Hes asleep, but fitfully, head full of troubling dreams.

KIRA (v.o.)
It is the Sisko.



ON SISKO


As he now stands beside the spire, looking down at his own unconscious sleeping body. The image has become hazy and dreamlike were in a PROPHET VISION.

Sisko looks to the voice that spoke PROPHET KIRA, stood likewise looking down at Siskos sleeping form.

PROPHET KIRA
The Sisko is troubled. Does the
game go badly?

SISKO
The game? You mean the plan. The
plan to stop the Ascendants.

PROPHET KIRA
The game does not end. The game
continues until all players are
out. The Sisko taught us this.

To emphasise her point, Kira lifts a BASEBALL in her hand, and lobs it to Sisko. He catches it instinctively, and...


CUT TO:


52 INT. DS9 KIRAS OFFICE


Sisko catches the ball just as he did in 8x26 Unity pt 3. Prophet Kira stands behind her desk, having just thrown the ball. All the crew of Ops silently observe their exchange.

SISKO
(realising)
This is when I returned from
the wormhole.

PROPHET KIRA
When the Sisko returned to the
linear. The Sisko knew the game.

SISKO
Yes. When I was with you, I
felt like I understood. I knew
what needed to be done. But it
fades... with time.

As Sisko struggles to remember what he needs to...


53 INT. ASCENDANT VESSEL


As Iliana listens to Kira...

KIRA
Im not missing anything. The
Prophets reached out to three
races. The Bajorans, the Eavoq
and the Ascendants. Its all
three, like there were three
of us in the wormhole.

ILIANA
Why would it be three, Nerys?
Why would there be two races on
the Gamma Quadrant side, but
only one on the Alpha side?

As Kira tries to figure this out...


54 INT. ASHALLA MONASTERY GARDEN - NIGHT


Full night now, as Yevir, Opaka and Solis hash it out.

YEVIR
Yes. Oralius... was an Eavoq.

SOLIS
But how is that possible?

YEVIR
The same way that the writer
of that book youre holding
tight was also an Eavoq.

SOLIS
What?!

OPAKA
(thunderstruck)
By the Prophets... Alu.

Opaka remembers...


FLASHBACK 10x11 HARMONY


Itu is relating the tale of their escape from the previous Ascendant crusade to Opaka...

ITU
Many sacrificed themselves to
bring it to pass. My brother
Alu was among the lost.



BACK TO SCENE


Opaka works to absorb all of this again...

OPAKA
Itu, my friend and guide among
the Eavoq. He told me that they
used their Orbs he called them
the Eyes of Light - to hide them-
selves away from the Ascendants.
His brother Alu was in charge of
the effort, and was lost after-
wards. I simply assumed hed
been killed...

YEVIR
But perhaps instead of being
killed, he was transported.

SOLIS
To the Temple?

OPAKA
We know the Orbs do have that
capacity when all of them are
working together. That is how
the Emissary returned to us.



55 THE WA


Kira is trying to understand what Iliana is telling her...

KIRA
Youre saying theres another
Prophet race out there? On our
side of the wormhole?

ILIANA
Why not? Look at us, Nerys. You
and me. Were reflections of one
another. If theres a race right
on the Temples doorstep on each
side, why wouldnt there be a
race a little further away on
each side too? Like... ten light
years further away, for example.

The truth finally begins to dawn on Kira...


56 INT. ASHALLA MONASTERY GARDEN - NIGHT


Yevir, Opaka and Solis figure it out between them...

YEVIR
Alu went to the Temple... and
from there to Bajor.

SOLIS
Where he became known as Ohalu.
And his strange interpretation
of the Prophets was written down
by the Bajorans of the time...

OPAKA
And they created the Ohalavar
religion around him.

YEVIR
Yes. After a while, I imagine
he tried to return to his own
people. Perhaps he got caught in
the Denorios Belt by accident,
and whisked away in its tachyon
eddies, just like the Emissary.
And he ended up on...



57 THE WA


Kira finishes the thought...

KIRA
...Cardassia. By the Prophets.
Its not three... its four.

ILIANA
Bajor and the Eavoq... both
loving and peaceful. Cardassia
and the Ascendants...

KIRA
...Both going to war.



58 INT. DS9 KIRAS OFFICE


Back in Siskos Prophet vision. Sisko looks out of the office window to the stars outside. His reflection in the glass wavers... and becomes an image of Iliana. The Prophet Kira walks up behind Sisko...

PROPHET KIRA
She is the Fire.

SISKO
(ominous)
And the Fire will burn.
(back to Kira)
But what about you? I mean,
what about Kira?

PROPHET KIRA
She is the Hand. The Sisko
taught us this.

As if to demonstrate, Prophet Kira holds out her hand... and another hand takes it. Silver and shiny, an Ascendant hand. Kira looks up, and shes holding the hand of Raiq.

The two women turn to look at Sisko, whos watching them both, trying to grasp the imagery here.

Raiq holds out her other hand, and into it slips another shape the not-quite-a-hand of an Eavoq pink ribbon limb. ITUs single eye smiles warmly.


59 INT. ASHALLA MONASTERY GARDEN - NIGHT


Opaka, Solis and Yevir...

SOLIS
(re Opaka)
Alu...
(re self)
Ohalu...
(re Yevir)
...and Oralius.

YEVIR
Exactly. The Hebitians called
their gods the Fates. Oralius
brought understanding of the
Fates to the Hebitians.

OPAKA
He was their Emissary.

YEVIR
Mister Garak also says that
Oralius left Cardassia when
the climate changed...

SOLIS
He returned to Bajor, bringing
the jevonite figurine as a
symbol of unity... and was
buried at BHala.

YEVIR
Yes. As for Garak himself, he
said that the figures he saw
in the Vinculum anointed him
as the Hand of the Fates.



60 BLACK SPACE


Siskos Prophet vision has now darkened. He watches the three figures in front of him Kira, Raiq and Itu, all holding hands. Itu holds out another pink limb...

...And a grey scaly hand takes it. GARAK. The Cardassian man smiles warmly, like the others, and takes Kiras spare hand. Now the four of them are connected in a circle. Sisko watches, understanding coming to him...


61 INT. ASCENDANT VESSEL


Iliana explaining to Kira...

ILIANA
So you see, Nerys... this is
going to happen. The symmetry
is perfect. Cardassia raped
and destroyed Bajor, and now
the Ascendants will destroy the
Eavoq. And if you get in our
way, well destroy you too.
Its the will of the Prophets.



62 THE WA


Where Kira stands opposite Iliana...

KIRA
You really believe that.

ILIANA
Of course.

KIRA
And are you really so arrogant
that you think your beliefs are
the only ones that are right?

Iliana gives one last infuriating confident smile.

ILIANA
Theyre your beliefs, Nerys.
I got them from you.

With that, Ilianas image whisks away. The mirror shimmers and thickens, returning to the usual white formlessness. Kira is left standing alone. Iliana is right. As much as she wishes she didnt believe it, she does. The Ascendants are going to win.


FADE OUT:

END OF ACT FOUR


.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old May 27 2012, 04:14 PM   #7
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

.


ACT FIVE


FADE IN:


63 EXT. DEEP SPACE NINE


Establishing the station, with the Defiant, the Dominion ship and the Even Odds all in a row around the docking ring. We focus on the Even Odds, crawling with work bees and repair crews...


64 INT. DS9 – DOCKING RING CORRIDOR


Vaughn waits by the airlock, heavy-hearted. Other officers come and go from the ship, busy working on repairs and analyses. After a moment, Kira emerges slowly into the corridor. She’s a long way away, mind full of worries.

VAUGHN
Captain? Are you alright?

KIRA
Uhh... yeah. I, uhh... I need
to speak to Benjamin.

VAUGHN
I thought you might. But it’s
easier said than done...

KIRA
Why? What happened?



65 INT. DS9 – PROMENADE


Quark carries a tray of drinks out to a group of customers sat at an outside table. That done, he turns and JUMPS...

QUARK
Aah!

...Because the Aarruri family are approaching. Pif leads the way, striding on confidently with his six tiny puppies following behind, and Sett bringing up the rear. They gaze around, astonished, seeing the massive, bustling, sprawling array of the Promenade for the first time.

PIF
Come on, kids. We’re on the
other side of the galaxy!
Let’s explore!

And they carry on their way, the nervous puppies making sure to stay safely between their parents. All around, the people watch in mild surprise, quickly turning to awws.

Quark however cowers back, holding up the tray to protect himself. Nog wanders up, amused at his uncle’s response.

QUARK
What are... they?

NOG
They’re called Aarruri, Uncle.
They’re from the Gamma Quadrant.

They smile tensely but politely as the dog-aliens pass on their way to the windows. Quark mutters under his breath...

QUARK
Furry things creep me out.

NOG
(rictus grin)
I know. Just smile.



66 INT. DS9 – INFIRMARY


A sudden YELL – the Cardassian medic Glessin has jerked awake and is terrified, confused, looking around himself.

GLESSIN
What - ? Where am I?

Bashir rushes to his side, tries to calm him.

BASHIR
It’s alright, you’re safe. My
name’s Julian, I’m helping you
and your crew mates.

GLESSIN
You’re... human?

BASHIR
That’s right.

GLESSIN
But this room – it’s Cardassian.

BASHIR
Yes, this is Deep Space Nine.
You’re in the Alpha Quadrant.

GLESSIN
This is Terok Nor?

And how does he feel about that? He doesn’t know. Then the door opens and Glessin GASPS again. Bashir turns to see why – Taran’atar has entered, with Jake and Rena behind him.

BASHIR
Ambassador...

TARAN’ATAR
Doctor. Are they recovered?

BASHIR
Not yet. But they will be.

Rena steps closer to Glessin, who is a bit uncomfortable because of the Jem’Hadar. But Rena’s soothing manner helps. Meanwhile, Jake has approached another bio-bed, carrying the injured but conscious Dez.

JAKE
Dez... it’s good to see you.

DEZ
That’s funny, cause I wish I’d
never seen you in my life.

JAKE
Dez, I -

DEZ
Save it. I just hope you made
your precious father proud.

Jake exchanges an uncomfortable look with Rena...


67 INT. B’HALA CAVES


Sisko lies asleep on his bedroll at the foot of the bantaca spire, tossing and turning in his vision-dream.

RENA (v.o.)
The Sisko is linear.



68 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE – LIVING ROOM


Back inside the vision. Sisko stands in his living room, grabbing a RENA PROPHET by the arms, as a JAKE PROPHET and KASIDY PROPHET (holding baby Rebecca) look on.

SISKO
I know I’m linear! That’s why
I need your help. This body –
Rena. Tell me who she is.



69 EXT. SISKO’S HOUSE – GARDEN


When Jake first introduced Rena to the family, by the tree behind the house, in 9x10 “Fragments and Omens.”

JAKE PROPHET
This is Azeni Korena... my wife.

SISKO
Yes, I get that. But what else?
I know she’s important. Why?



70 EXT. SISKO’S HOUSE – GARDEN


Now Sisko is sat at the base of the tree, discussing with Vaughn, as in 10x02 “Brave New World.”

VAUGHN PROPHET
The Sisko has forgotten. The
Sisko is linear. But there are
many lines. The Sisko taught
us this.

SISKO
Many lines...

It’s starting to dawn on him. The Vaughn Prophet gazes at him, as Sisko’s memory starts to force itself forwards...


71 MONTAGE FROM PREVIOUS EPS


Flashes of memory, quick moments that come and go, building in speed and intensity...

-- Adult Jake introduces time-displaced Sisko to his future wife (4x03 “The Visitor”)

-- Three comet fragments approach the Gamma end of the wormhole (3x15 “Destiny”)

-- In engineering, Sisko is caught in a warp core discharge and phases out of existence (4x03 “The Visitor”)

-- The four “Hands” standing in a circle (from earlier)

-- Sisko stands in the white space of the Temple, as older Jake is unable to rescue him (4x03 “The Visitor”)

-- Raiq looks curiously into Kira’s face, on the bridge of the Defiant (10x12 “Heresy”)

-- Rena’s drawing of the figures at Yyn (from earlier)

-- Vaughn punches Sisko in the face, by the old tree behind his house (9x24 “Ha’mara”)

-- Sisko standing in the circle of numerous other alternate Siskos (9x21 “Fearful Symmetry”)

-- In the open mouth of the wormhole, the Defiant bucks as it’s rocked by a distortion wave (4x03 “The Visitor”)

-- Sisko curled up at the base of the bantaca, crying in the arms of Prylar Eivos (from later)

-- In engineering, Sisko is caught in a warp core discharge and phases out of existence (repeated)


72 INT. B’HALA CAVES


Prylar Eivos dashes urgently into the bantaca chamber, coming to see what the noise is. It’s Sisko, awake now and wailing in anguish, a desperate crying, his heart broken.

EIVOS
Emissary... what’s wrong...

Sisko can’t answer. Eivos crouches by him and holds him.
Sisko collapses into Eivos’s arms, weeps against his chest.

EIVOS
Emissary, whatever it is, it
will be alright. The Prophets
will take care of us.

Sisko still can’t answer. But the sobs are slowly coming under control. Eivos doesn’t want to pry, only to comfort.

EIVOS
Did you find what you sought?

SISKO
Yes.
(beat)
And I wish I hadn’t.

As Sisko sniffles into Eivos’s robes...


73 EXT. ASCENDANT ENCAMPMENT - NIGHT


Cardinal Essk stands on a small dais at the bottom of the Ascendant encampment, surrounded by ceremonial flames.

ESSK
I wish I did not need to say
these things, my brothers and
sisters. I wish... I did not
know the things I know.

Now we see that Essk is orating for the entire Ascendant crowd that fills the arena. They’re curious, a little confused, but listening. Essk is giving it all the power of his position, proclaiming with strength and dignity.

ESSK
I know it will be hard for you
to hear. But I believe... that
Mistress Iliana has lied to us.

Confused and slightly alarmed mutters around the crowd. Can the Cardinal possibly be serious?

The edge of the encampment. As Essk continues his speech in the background, Iliana strides up from the shuttle park.

ESSK (o.s.)
She has tried to usurp your love
and faith from its due course –
the doctrine that has sustained
the children of the True in our
great Quest for millennia!


Raiq is waiting for Iliana. The Knight nods towards the centre of the encampment, where Essk holds court.

Down in the centre of the amphitheatre, Essk passionately preaches to his worried flock.

ESSK
It pains me to say it, but I
do not trust that she has the
interests of the Ascendants
at her centre.

Iliana’s voice echoes out from somewhere within the crowd, amplified by the bowl formation of the encampment.

ILIANA (o.s.)
I knew you were jealous, Essk.
But I never thought you would
stoop this low.

The gathered Ascendants gasp, looking around for the source of the voice. Whispers continue to spread. Essk puffs him-self up to his greatest height of importance. He is scared, but determined to go on with what he believes is right.

ESSK
Jealousy is my least concern,
Mistress. I know where you
have been. I know with whom
you have been speaking.

Iliana makes her way through the crowd, strolling, not concerned in the least. The crowd parts to let her through.

ILIANA
Your own fear and mistrust has
led you to spy on me. I feel
sorry for you, Cardinal.

ESSK
Fear for yourself, Mistress.
Hear me, children of the True.
This woman, who claims to light
the path to the Fortress, has
even today consorted with the
heretics who block that path.

Gasps of amazement around the crowd as Essk goes on...

ESSK
Do you deny it, Iliana? I heard
it with my own ears, as you held
your secret meeting with the
Bajoran woman, Kira. You spoke
of meeting her before. Of yet
more races who shame the True
with their false names. I heard
you say you do not wish her dead.

All this adds more confusion to the crowd of Ascendants. But Iliana cuts through it with style and grace.

ILIANA
Do you hear that, Ascendants?
The fear in his voice? He knows
he speaks heresy. But he is so
scared of losing his position,
of losing your love, that he is
willing to keep you from your
rightful place in the Fortress
simply to remain your Cardinal.

ESSK
No! She lies to you!

ILIANA
Will you allow him to keep you
from the Fortress, Ascendants?
Will you let him desecrate the
very point of your existence
for his own selfish purposes?

At the back of the crowd, Raiq shouts out loud.

RAIQ
Never!

Other knights begin to pick up the sentiment, repeating Raiq’s oath. The crowd is turning against Essk, and he knows it. By now Iliana has reached the dais at the centre.

ILIANA
What do we do to those who have
lost faith? To the heretics who
profess faith, but have none?

BLAS
They die and burn!

ROARS of approval from the crowd. Essk’s golden, segmented eyes flare in panic. Iliana turns to him, the baying crowd at her back, and smiles.

ILIANA
Then bring the stake!

Before Essk can protest any further, knights rush forward from the crowd, religious bloodlust inflamed. They GRAB Essk roughly and drag him off the dais. They bring him in front of the crowd, hold him still.

By some unseen means, a gleaming silver stake BURSTS out of the ground. A knight waves a hand - silver metallic ropes coil out from the stake and grab Essk by the arms and legs. They tighten, pulling him back against the stake.

He struggles in desperation, but there’s nothing he can do. Their job done, the knights step back. The crowd roars, thrusting their burning spears to the sky. Essk shouts -

ESSK
Wait! You cannot do this! I
am your Cardinal!

Iliana steps close to him, speaks confidentially.

ILIANA
They’re not listening, Essk.

ESSK
Mistress... please...

ILIANA
Now you believe? Too late. The
funny thing is, you actually
played right into my hands.
(off Essk’s
confusion)
I deliberately cut you out,
Essk. I raised Raiq above you
precisely to make you jealous.
And it worked like a charm.

ESSK
But... why?

ILIANA
To make sure they’ll follow me.
Once they see what happens to
anyone who doubts me – even a
Cardinal – they’ll all follow
me into the Fire without a
thought. Because I am the Fire,
Essk. And what does Fire do?

ESSK
(resigned)
It burns.

Iliana steps back. She makes eye contact with the weeping Cardinal. He knows this is the end. Iliana waves a hand...

And flames BURST into life around the stake. He SCREAMS as his flesh begins to crackle. The ROAR of the crowd grows, building to a fever pitch as they thrill to the sight of a heretic burning at the stake. The flames grow higher and higher, swallowing Essk completely, his agonised shrieks echoing off the stone walls of the encampment.

As the light of the flames flickers on Iliana’s serenely smiling, watching face...

ILIANA (v.o.)
I’m coming for you next, Nerys.



BLACK OUT:


END OF SHOW


.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!

Last edited by lvsxy808; May 28 2012 at 09:24 AM.
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old May 29 2012, 02:02 AM   #8
Wally
Lieutenant Commander
 
Wally's Avatar
 
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

Caught up with a bunch in quick succession. Finished reading this on the eve of picking up 'Plagues of Night' so I'm quite excited and happy to be getting back into DS9.

It really feels like this is season coming to a close, so many plotlines are starting to come together, and I'm happy with pretty much all of them.

The reveal of Etana was a huge huge surprise, as was a possible *hint* about Rena. I just completely never considered such twists; but in hindsight, something always seemed strange about Rena in the first place.

I think the prime revelation about the 4 religions is something the Relaunch itself was clearly aiming towards, and I'm glad it has now been finally spelled out. Really curious to see where this goes.

The Ascendant War. Glad to see that it will likely be the Dominion bearing the brunt of this, rather than another thing Starfleet will be dragged into. Between the Dominion War and the Borg Apocalypse, I've really had my fill of war stories and doom and gloom. Happy that Taranatar's head is screwed on straight again.

Also, I am happy this resolution of the Section 31 plotline. The way Cole was defeated was, in my humble opinion, perfect. When it comes to espionage tales in sci-fi, the technology too often takes center stage. Holograms, teleporters, forcefields and the like always leave a feeling of deus ex machina at the end. This time, it didn't.

Also appreciate this showing that Bashir is on his way towards acting the way he does in "Zero Sum Game", he isn't there yet, and acted in a way consistent with his character. Believing it is possible to be a spy, but to keep morally clean as well. Vaughn knows otherwise, and it is good that they disagreed.

Now, for Sisko. Oooff. This one is going to be hard task I'm sure, to take him to the point he is in "Rough Beasts of Empire", a place that a considerable amount of fandom has NOT agreed with. If this series can pull off that transition seeming believable and consistent with his character, then it might be on par with Kirsten Beyer salvaging the sinking ship that was Voyager.

Keep up the good work.
Wally is offline   Reply With Quote
Old May 29 2012, 02:44 PM   #9
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

Wally wrote: View Post
Caught up with a bunch in quick succession. Finished reading this on the eve of picking up 'Plagues of Night' so I'm quite excited and happy to be getting back into DS9.
Don't spoil me! I haven't got it yet.


Wally wrote: View Post
The reveal of Etana was a huge huge surprise,
I was in the midst of planning out the season months ago, and I just stopped and thought to myself... "I think I need a Section 31 spy on the station." So then it became a question of "who should it be?" It couldn't just be a random nobody or bit-part player because then we wouldn't care. Etana was the logical choice, even though I couldn't help thinking, "Wow, that's pretty big. Can I really do that?"

But she is perfect. She worked under both Ro and Bashir (even though her move to Bashir was only a production accident, but what the hell, let's make use of it), she's close to both of them, and she has a partner whose reaction to it can play into the drama. She's been Ro's best friend - Ro was even going to let her take over Security when she was considering resigning in Cathedral. Plus, back when I was adapting Demons of Air and Darkness for season 8, I put Etana in as the Militia officer driving Ro and Quark's escape shuttle. It had been a random bit-player in the book, but I saw the opportunity to properly introduce somebody who I knew was going to be a frequently recurring character. And that just fed into it perfectly too - Demons came immediately after Abyss, the last S31 story. It just made sense.

But at the same time, I didn't want to make Etana out-and-out evil, because that would ruin the nice character we've had for the last two years of story-time. Hence her being a dupe of Cole - he gets her to do her dirty work without telling her why she's doing it. Because why would he?


Wally wrote: View Post
as was a possible *hint* about Rena. I just completely never considered such twists; but in hindsight, something always seemed strange about Rena in the first place.
As you say, there has to be something going on there, because why else introduce her as a character in the stories, in Fragments and Omens? Well, I think I've figured out what it is.


Wally wrote: View Post
I think the prime revelation about the 4 religions is something the Relaunch itself was clearly aiming towards, and I'm glad it has now been finally spelled out. Really curious to see where this goes.
Yeah, that was hinted at pretty heavily in The Calling, which is why I had to include that story in my season, because it fed into what I wanted to do with the Ascendant storyline. The bit about Oralius and Ohalu being an Eavoq in my own invention, but again, it makes sense to me. The names are just too similar (as is B'Hala, where the jevonite figurine came from).


Wally wrote: View Post
Happy that Taranatar's head is screwed on straight again.
Yeah, he's been through so much now, but I think he needed to go through a few more steps before he was ready to say "Enough." At the end of The Soul Key he was still dithering between returning to the Founders and doing his own thing. He said, "I was not meant to be free," and he believed it. But the multiple-L'Haans storyline was enough to finally push him over the edge and make him say, "You know what? Fuck this."


Wally wrote: View Post
Also, I am happy this resolution of the Section 31 plotline. The way Cole was defeated was, in my humble opinion, perfect. When it comes to espionage tales in sci-fi, the technology too often takes center stage. Holograms, teleporters, forcefields and the like always leave a feeling of deus ex machina at the end. This time, it didn't.
Overconfidence. He thought he had all the tricks at his disposal when he was dealing with Bashir, but just like Vaughn said, he forgot to look behind him. Then he did exactly the same with a Vulcan colleague who had just been mind-raped by a Jem'Hadar and who he had just threatened to kill. Dumb-ass. No surprise he got killed.

We know from Zero Sum Game that Cole is no longer in the picture and L'Haan is still operating. Who better to have killed him than L'Haan herself?

Wally wrote: View Post
Also appreciate this showing that Bashir is on his way towards acting the way he does in "Zero Sum Game", he isn't there yet, and acted in a way consistent with his character. Believing it is possible to be a spy, but to keep morally clean as well. Vaughn knows otherwise, and it is good that they disagreed.
L'Haan had to kill Cole. So that meant Vaughn and Bashir couldn't kill Cole. How to achieve that without some wacky unlikely escape? Make it a character choice. Bashir and Vaughn are on the same line, but Bashir leans to one side and Vaughn leans to the other. Even so, Vaughn does back down, and regrets what he nearly had to do. He's not completely black hat, but he's definitely prepared to go a lot further in that direction than Bashir is.

Wally wrote: View Post
Now, for Sisko. Oooff. This one is going to be hard task I'm sure, to take him to the point he is in "Rough Beasts of Empire", a place that a considerable amount of fandom has NOT agreed with.
Well, don't forget there's a good two years between the end of my stories, and Destiny and RBoE. Plenty of time for more stuff to happen. But we have seen Sisko obsessed before, so I have no problem believing he would take it a bit too far.

But then, if he hadn't done what he did to Rena, Kasidy wouldn't have thrown him out of the house, and he wouldn't have ended up at B'Hala, and he wouldn't have had his vision, and he wouldn't have found the answers he needs.

.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old June 2 2012, 10:32 AM   #10
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

A small FYI - the site I was using to host all the PDFs recently freaked out and cancelled lots of people's accounts because of copyright issues. So the links up at the top of the thread (and every previous thread) are now null and void.

I'm working on getting them uploaded elsewhere, and will post new links later tonight. The actual on-page text here and at Ad Astra is unaffected, of course.

EDIT: Okay, here are the new links:

10x01 Emancipation
10x02 Brave New World
10x03 Steppin' Out
10x04 Easy Come, Easy Go
10x05 Deep Down
10x06 The Dream Box
10x07 Instinct
10x08 Property Values
10x09 Blank Slate
10x10 In Two Minds
10x11 Harmony
10x12 Heresy
10x13 The Case of the Flamping Flurble
10x14 Against the Odds
10x15 Inside Out
10x16 I Will Survive
10x17 Reservoir Ferengi
10x18 The Calling
10x19 Reset
10x20 In the Stars

.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!

Last edited by lvsxy808; June 2 2012 at 06:26 PM.
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old June 3 2012, 04:43 PM   #11
Wally
Lieutenant Commander
 
Wally's Avatar
 
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

Finished Plagues of Night and I must say it is easily my favorite Typhon Pact book. It did a great job smoothing over some of the weaker points of Zero Sum Game and Rough Beasts of Empire. Making Sarina Douglas seem less "BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!" evil that she seemed at the end of the first novel, and making Sisko's actions seem more justified.

Plus, nothing in it contradicted the great work being done here. Frustratingly, there were no flashbacks or huge revelations of the past, just more throwaway lines that could easily have multiple stories based around.

Etana and Richter are still around, so it was a good call to make her interaction with S31 a minor one, since she seems to still be in good standing working for Bashir. The kidnapping of Rebeca storyline looks like it will be a big deal, that should be cool.

Back to this set of stories. I feel sorry for Dr. Tarses, with Bashir coming back. What is the date now? How long until he gets his gig on Aventine?

And off top with most things, I've wondered. At this point, Taran'atar is far and away the oldest of Jem'hadar. Has any thought of aging difficulties been given? He is basically superhuman at this point, but I'm sure the Founders spent all their time engineering their soldiers to grow fast and be lethal, without much care to longevity. Burn bright and burn fast, and all that. I wonder what stories are possible now that he has his full freedom and mental facilities, but that his body his beginning to fail him. No longer being faster and stronger than everyone else?

In any case, as always, cannot wait until the next episode.
Wally is offline   Reply With Quote
Old June 5 2012, 11:03 AM   #12
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

I've been very nervous that any revelations in PoN might completely ruin my stories. I think I've been lucky so far (and no, I still haven't read it yet). I definitely used aspects of RBoE and ZSG to inform my stories, and in other cases willfully ignored a couple of minor details because they did contradict what I wanted to do.

Timing-wise, this season has taken a year, as ST seasons usually do. But since I made the existing novels into two seasons (as opposed to the one year that they supposedly took in the original story) we are three years after the end of the war. That places us just at the beginning of the Time to series, one year before Nemesis, and two years before Destiny. Dax gets command of the Aventine immediately before Destiny.

And that's an interesting question about Taran'atar. To my knowledge the novels haven't come back to him except for a passing mention in ZSG, so it's definitely an open question. I did write a line for Vaughn when I was adapting Warpath, along the lines of "JemHadar dont get weaker with age. They just get stronger, and faster, and smarter." But that doesn't rule out something interesting and unexpected happening. I was trying to play with that a little bit with the L'Haan-katra thread earlier in my season - not in physical terms but mental ones, as if to say, maybe this is just what happens when a Jem'Hadar gets as old as you, he starts to lose his mind.

.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old June 6 2012, 12:14 AM   #13
Ln X
Fleet Captain
 
Ln X's Avatar
 
Location: The great gig in the sky
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

Any chance that Odo will call it quits with the messed up Dominion (or the situation literally goes completely out of his control) and returns back to DS9 in your future stories?
__________________
Star Trek: The Approaching Shadow...

Caption contest: DS9
Ln X is offline   Reply With Quote
Old June 6 2012, 10:03 AM   #14
lvsxy808
Rear Admiral
 
lvsxy808's Avatar
 
Location: London
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

Well, Odo shows up in the next story, which I just posted...



.
__________________
What happened between THE SOUL KEY and DESTINY? Find out in DEEP SPACE NINE SEASON 11!

Read 11x03 "SELF DESTRUCT INITIATED" now, or download as a pdf or ebook to read later!
lvsxy808 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old June 6 2012, 12:06 PM   #15
Ln X
Fleet Captain
 
Ln X's Avatar
 
Location: The great gig in the sky
Re: DS9 Season 10, ep 10x20 - "In the Stars" (part 1 of 3)

lvsxy808 wrote: View Post
Well, Odo shows up in the next story, which I just posted...



.
Yeah I noticed; though since the Jem'Hadar appear to be fighting a futile battle, there may not be a Dominion left...
__________________
Star Trek: The Approaching Shadow...

Caption contest: DS9
Ln X is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump



All times are GMT +1. The time now is 03:14 AM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.6
Copyright ©2000 - 2015, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
FireFox 2+ or Internet Explorer 7+ highly recommended.