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Old July 23 2011, 01:49 AM   #61
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Re: Star Trek: From Risa With Love--An Adventure Of Dr. Julian Bashir

The plot thickens! Julian has officially entered I'm-Going-To-Win mode. I love it!
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Old July 23 2011, 06:31 PM   #62
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^ Damn, right. He's become one sneaky SOB, that's for bloody certain.
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Old July 23 2011, 07:30 PM   #63
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Well, he did have two good teachers: Garak and Sloan.
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Old July 23 2011, 07:36 PM   #64
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Well, he did have two good teachers: Garak and Sloan.
Hmm, Sloan was more like a passing acquaintance, wasnt he? Bashir sorta whacked him, albeit indirectly. Teacher would be a bit pushing it.
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Old July 23 2011, 07:50 PM   #65
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^Well, I mean it in the sense that, as Julian himself notes to Sarina, he's since learned to put himself in the mind of such an agent.

And I'd say "Extreme Measures" was an instance of Julian's embracing his dark side, to take Sloan down. Perhaps the student surpasses the teacher, in that case--to put it mildly?

(Of course, I will say Sarina's reaction to his invoking Sloan's name is a clue to a little something....)
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Old July 23 2011, 11:57 PM   #66
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Of course, it's a dummy bomb! There are twelve episodes left in the season.

Wait, what am I saying? This story does have a bit 24-like feel with the major being resolved and then a few loose that are yet to be tied. I look forward to see how this revelation finally plays out.
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Old July 24 2011, 12:41 AM   #67
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^Glad to hear it!

It's funny--as a fellow fan of that show, I always try to invoke the 24 "feel" whenever I'm using Section 31.

Sloan's backstory in "Passing Of Value" was actually inspired partly by the tragic finale of Season 1--Terri is brought to the CTU for her safety...but that's where the mole is, and Jack returns to discover his wife's lifeless body....

Here--I'd say Bashir's showing a bit of a "Jack Bauer" element.
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Old July 24 2011, 01:58 AM   #68
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Sloan's backstory in "Passing Of Value" was actually inspired partly by the tragic finale of Season 1--Terri is brought to the CTU for her safety...but that's where the mole is, and Jack returns to discover his wife's lifeless body....
Hadn't thought of it like that. But speaking of which, the latest chapter in my current on-going story has a powerful weapon being stopped, but the rest of the story will involve tracking down the true masterminds of the Grand Conspiracy (similar to Days 2, 5, 7, and 8 of 24).
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Old July 24 2011, 04:19 PM   #69
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This level of sneakiness from the good doctor shows that he would have been a good operative for Section 31, if they'd managed to get their hands on him!

Good writing, Rush. It still has that Fleming feel.
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Old July 24 2011, 10:32 PM   #70
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Thank you, Badger--very much!

I'm actually trying to make that a central theme of my tales focusing on Julian. For all his bravado about how Section 31 is unjustified in what it does--the immense irony is, like Michael Corleone before him, he's constantly feeling led to do those very things he condemns, in order to take on those he sees as the enemy.

Though he acknowledged it somewhat to Ezri in my "Annihilation Fantasies"...in effect, he can't seem to stop--because, as far as he's concerned, it's what has to be done. And as a result...his words of condemnation ring more and more hollow, as the years go on.


Thank you all for reading! Come tomorrow night...we'll get going once again.
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For all his bravado about how Section 31 is unjustified in what it does--the immense irony is, like Michael Corleone before him, he's constantly feeling led to do those very things he condemns, in order to take on those he sees as the enemy.
We also saw that in Sisko trying force Eddington's surrender. If he could led down that dark path, anyone could, even the person who would presume to lecture him the same way he presumed to lecture Admiral Ross. The common thread there is dealings with one particular enemy. Even Jack Bauer, who already makes up the rules as he goes, takes things a step further in his dealings with Charles Logan.
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Old July 26 2011, 12:13 AM   #72
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And now...the re-intro to Mr. Crant ("played" by Cristoph Watz).

Note: from this point until the epilogue are chapters I've written this summer, as opposed to last fall/spring.


Star Trek: Deep Space Nine
"From Risa With Love"
Chapter 12



Mr. Crant watched him enter the suite, from a safe enough distance so that the doctor wouldnt take notice of him. Now, it was safe to approach the door, and scan.

Finally, he took a few steps back, and reached into his work-baghe was now disguised as a maintenance worker for the Resortpulling out his transmitter, pressing the control.

The voice of Mr. Crolin answered. Well?

Hes inside.

Very good. You know what to do.

Of course.

The line closed. Mr. Crant put the transmitter away, approached the doctors suite, and knocked on the door.


* * *

Bashir turned to the door with a frown. Now thats odd. Who could that be?

He checked the tricorder. Holland was still in her room.

He pulled his phaser, holding it discreetly by his side, under his wrist. He walked to the door, opening it.

The man in the hall looked oddly familiar, somehow. He had a gaunt face, with a straight nose, a prominent chin, and deeply perceptive-looking eyes. His hair was short-cut, yet slightly tousled. He was dressed in the attire of a maintenance workerbut somehow, it didnt seem to fit Bashirs feeling.

Excuse me, he said, in a slightly nervous, green tone of voice, You are Dr.uh, Julian Bashir, yes?

Bashir nodded slowly, unable to shake the sense of dj vu. Of course. Dont the records give my room number?

The man chuckled, and shrugged. Well, you cant be too careful, sirrecords can be filled with errors, if you understand what I mean.

Isuppose so. Now, may I ask what you want? I dont recall putting in an order for

Oh, thereve been some problems with the supply systemsparticularly the water. Were checking up on all the rooms on the supply line in question.

Bashirs frown deepened, as he cautiously stepped aside, to let the man pass. I havent had any problems.

Oh, I dont doubt it. Stillwe dont want to take any chances.

Of course.

Bashir waved the man in the direction of the restroom, making sure not to turn his back on him.

Where have I seen that man before?

He walked over to the desk, activating his console. He opened a channel to the front desk of the Resort.

Resort of the Vulcan Stone. How may I help you?

Bashir kept his voice quiet enough to not call the attention of the worker. Uh, yesthis is Julian Bashir. Im in suite 973. Was there a work order for these roomsinspection, or something?

Let me check.

Bashir turned in the direction of the restroom again. He could pick up the sound of the man taking something from the bag.

The voice on the other end came back on. No, sir. Would you like to file an order now?

Bashir narrowed his eyes. Never mindforget I called.

Of course, sir.

As the line closed, Bashir rose to his feet, phaser in hand.

So! he asked, in a cheery tone, Whats your name?

Sir? asked the worker.

Bashir walked over to the entrance to the restroom. The man was kneeling by the sink, his back to Bashir.

Julian shrugged. Oh, I was just wondering

The worker shrugged, not looking up. My names Crant, sir.

Bashir took a step forward. Wellhave you been working here long?

Not long, sira few weeks.

Indeed?

Sir, if youdont mind, Idlike to finish with my work.

Bashir raised his phaser. And what would that behmm?

Sir?

Bashir narrowed his eyes. Get up.

Crant turned to himnot confused, not angry, just blank. Sir?

Dont sir me, Mr. Crant. Youre not working for the Resort. In fact, Id wager youre with Crolinand youre here for the device. Am I right?

Crant stared at him, for a moment. Finallyhe let out a chuckle. Not bothering to get up, he relaxed, his head leaning against the sink. Excellent, Dr. Bashir, he said, his tone changing, conveying the confidence in his posture. I really must congratulate you, you know. Most of my quarry would have been dupedwell, long enough for this position to be reversed, at least.

He tilted his head. But Im curious: how did you know?

Bashir felt a smile. Oh, not muchjustI couldve sworn I saw you from somewhere.

And did you?

His smile grew. As a matter of factId say youve been keeping close tabs on my rooms. You were here last night, werent youwatching my quarters, under the guise of waiting outside another room?

Crant returned the smile. I didnt think youd notice.

I didnt. Frankly, that little fact didnt even register until just nowafter I checked with the front desk. He shrugged. Unfortunately for youI happen to have a very detailed memory.

Crant nodded slowly, and chuckled again. Well, Dr. BashirI must admit, youre a most intellectual treat. I enjoy a challenge.

Bashir returned the chuckle. I try. NowI take it youre looking to see if its here?

Oh, Ive just discovered its not, Doctor. Just before you confronted me, I ran a tricorder scan of the rooms.

Bashir nodded. So, youre going to try and locate my associate, next?

Crant spread out his hands. I suppose that would be the ideal next step.

Well, unfortunately, I have no intention of giving up her location. And from where I standyoure not in much of a position to make demands.

Crants smile grew. NoI suppose not.

And then, Bashir heard the sound of a disruptorand felt its force in the stomach. He mentally kicked himself for letting his guard downfor allowing himself to gloat over his quarry, and not wonder why Crant had been refusing to get up.

As he went down, the stun setting taking its effect, he heard Crant chuckle, as the man rose and brushed himself off.

Then again, he heard Crant say, as his vision faded into darkness, Perhaps Im in such a position, after all.


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Old July 26 2011, 12:00 PM   #73
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Ok so he hasnt gotten to the "shoot first, ask questions later" part. But he's getting there.
Nice, keep it up, Rushbo.
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Old July 27 2011, 12:53 AM   #74
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Thank you, ares93!
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Old July 27 2011, 02:15 AM   #75
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Now...more on Mr. Crant.

Brief Note: Interestingly enough, Crant was originally just a nameless "henchman", who happened to be the one assigned to watch Julian. But when I had the doctor confront him...I found I just couldn't resist characterizing him as a "worthy opponent" villain who in some sense admires and respects Bashir. When I'd finished the previous scene (and the next chapter), I then went back and polished everthing with "the henchman/operative/etc.", giving him the name, and few brief moments of characterization.


Okay. Enough of that. Now...


Star Trek: Deep Space Nine
"From Risa With Love"
Chapter 12



Mr. Crant walked over to Dr. Bashirs unconscious form, taking the phaser. He shook his head, chuckling once again. My, my, Doctorthat overconfidence in yourself. Its such a common failing. Take care that it doesnt prove to be your undoing, one day.

He went over to the desk, activating the computer console.

Hmmno messages. No calls, except for one just now, to the front desk. I suppose that means all their exchanges were in person, all their meetings prearranged. Brilliant of them, reallyto prevent anyone from listening in.

Ah, well. Perhaps it would be best to let the doctor wake upand then interrogate him.

Yesunfortunately, hes too much of a genius to succumb to the more intellectual methods. What I wouldnt give for a couple of Romulan mind probes. As it stands, I may have to use morebrutal means.

Not a pleasant thought. Crant was never one for brutality. He preferred more subtle means.

As he leaned back, weighing his optionsCrants gaze focused on a tricorder, lying on the desk.

Interesting He picked it up, and opened it.

It had a schematic of one of the floors of the Resortthe seventh floor, to be exact. A blinking dot was in room 742.

Hmmmost interesting.

A smile came to his face. Soit was Bashir whod gotten off two levels down, last night. And now, he has a homing device, either on the girlor the machine.

Either wayIm on the right track. Crolin will be mostsatisfied.

He rose to his feet. For a moment, he considered vaporizing Bashirto prevent any further interference.

But then, he remembered the thrill hed felt upon being discovered by a mostworthy opponent.

NoId as soon destroy a priceless Orb of Bajor than kill a challenge like this, so helplesslyregardless of what Crolin would rather have me do. Nobetter to defeat him in a gamean elaborate game, as it should be.

And so, he went over to the doctors bed, pulling off the bed-sheet. He tied up Bashirs wrists behind him, then his ankles. Then, he took a pillowcase, and tied it around the doctors mouth.

With a grin, he registered the location of the signal once more in his mindand set the tricorder down, beside Bashirs unconscious face. And then he left, his new destination firmly lodged in his mind.


* * *

Cynthia Holland threw the last linen strip across the room. Curse that Bashir, anywaywhy did he have to be so suspiciousso stuck-up, so self-righteous

Come on, Cynthia. You were keeping too much from himhe got suspicious. You have no one to blame but your

Spare me. Still, I shouldve known betterhis recordhes always been arrogant, and nosy, andand always getting in over his head. Butbut THIS?

Of course hed be angry. You kept the truth from him, didnt you?

Truth? Even if I did, thats no excuse for him toto trick me like thatto take me like he did, to seduce me, and

A knock on the door.

Oh, hes back, is he?

What? she thundered.

Maintenance, maam. We need to inspect the room.

She sighed. One minute.

She reached for the robewhich was still on the floor, where shed thrown it. Cynthia couldnt help but shake her head in bitter amusement. Poetic justice, isnt ityou went to all that trouble to seduce him into your trustand it ends up the other way around.

She put it on, securing the linen belt tight around her waist. Finally, she opened the door. If you dont mind, I would appreciate

She froze as the barrel of a disruptor pointed straight at her face.

The man smiled at her. Didnt he warn you wed be coming?


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