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View Poll Results: Grade "Star Trek: Destiny: Gods of Night"
Excellent 105 69.08%
Above Average 35 23.03%
Average 8 5.26%
Below Average 2 1.32%
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Old October 6 2008, 07:35 PM   #166
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Re: Star Trek: Destiny: Gods of Night - SPOILER Thread

Please, please, people, just don't respond. You know he's only going to keep moving the goalposts back and forth, hither and yon (and beyond yon) no matter what answer you give him...
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Old October 6 2008, 09:14 PM   #167
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Please, please, people, just don't respond. You know he's only going to keep moving the goalposts back and forth, hither and yon (and beyond yon) no matter what answer you give him...
Silly me.

I always thought if a person bought and read a book they had a right to express opinions regarding it.
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Old October 6 2008, 09:28 PM   #168
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Dayton3 wrote: View Post
William Leisner wrote: View Post
Please, please, people, just don't respond. You know he's only going to keep moving the goalposts back and forth, hither and yon (and beyond yon) no matter what answer you give him...
Silly me.

I always thought if a person bought and read a book they had a right to express opinions regarding it.
A right? That's an interesting way of putting it....
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Old October 6 2008, 11:02 PM   #169
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He's not saying you can't express your opinion, he's just telling us not to bother responding to you.
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Old October 6 2008, 11:25 PM   #170
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For starters right now intelligence about the Borg attacks seems a bit thin, without knowing how many ships they will send to the core worlds, it doesn't necessarily make sense to hold back.

For example if the Borg choose to send 1000 ships to attack each core area, they would be overwhelmed.

It appears what the Federation is doing is trying to buy time without losing to much space. So far most of the battle scenes show that the Borg's offensive weapons are working extremely well, if you recall they went through the 3 ships at Khitomer fairly quick, although they lost the cube, it cost the Federation another form of attack, which now is useless.

As David Mack shows in the book, the Federation is now facing anti-matter shortages; plus probably a host of other shortages.

In regards to Picard- think logically about it. Right now their only weapon which consistently works is the transphasic torpedo; if they don't use it, then what do they use? Borg ships can easily keep pace with and surpass the speed of Federation ships. How do they fight back if not with the weapons they have available. Only so many tactics exist.

Dayton3, I suggest Ender's Game as the book for you. Much more focus on the military aspects of combat. In some ways your concepts of military tactics and strategy reminds me of a Specialist 4 in a military course I took at a joint operations facility- he focused on guns and bullets and things that go boom. Unfortunately, his primary plan he proposed involved shelling the enemy airfield from battleships stationed off the coast; while at the same time dropping airborne troops on to the airfield to sieze it and landing C-141's on the same airfield to unload supplies on the airfield which our navy would be hypothetically be bombing.
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Old October 7 2008, 12:36 PM   #171
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I read Enders Game more than a decade ago.
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Old October 7 2008, 01:14 PM   #172
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Well, I finished the book and I want more!

Dave,
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read. You gave us a great story and left most people wanting more. Great job.

There was so much I enjoyed, the interweaving of the stories was truly well done and felt natural.

I actually got very uncomfortable at the scenes with Deanna and Will and Dr. Ree. It read so real to me as a father and a husband. Thanks for that.
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Old October 7 2008, 04:07 PM   #173
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^ Thanks for your comments, JAG. I'm glad you enjoyed Gods of Night; here's hoping that Mere Mortals and Lost Souls live up to (or exceed) your expectations, as well.
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Old October 7 2008, 04:48 PM   #174
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I just finished reading the book and thought it was well writen showing the different Starship crews and the mystery unfolding about the Columbia and the Calriean's. The battle with the borg was showing what a really desperate situation the federation is in. The sickbay scenes with Dr. Ree and Will & Deanna were painful to read. So sad.I just read the new excerpt for Mere Mortals I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks David for a terrific book.
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Old October 7 2008, 06:22 PM   #175
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^ Gracias. Glad you liked it!
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Old October 7 2008, 07:08 PM   #176
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^ Thanks for your comments, JAG. I'm glad you enjoyed Gods of Night; here's hoping that Mere Mortals and Lost Souls live up to (or exceed) your expectations, as well.
You are quite welcome. I have no doubts about meeting or exceeding my expectations based on the sample of Mere Mortals on Trekweb.
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Old October 7 2008, 11:07 PM   #177
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I finished GoN this weekend and I really enjoyed it. The weaving of the storylines was done very effectively, holding the audience's interests in each of the various crews. I want to give the author specific praise on his tight focus during the book. In an event trilogy such as this, the tendency is to "go big" with the scope and POV -- throwing in everything including an exploding kitchen sink. Instead, the reader of this book is given a limited perspective, often only seeing epic moments through the lens of one character.

The story of Owen Paris, the bridge scene on the Ranger, the Columbia's engineer and his moments with the Caeliar scientists -- these are all intimately told story beats that are all happening within scenes of massive-scale destruction. The novel is richer because we, the audience, are "with" these characters -- experiencing what they experience -- instead of purely witnessing the destruction from "outside." The character moments of this book, in post after post on this thread, are the most fondly remembered sections of the story for most readers in this forum. This is no accident and deserves to be noted as a fine bit of business on Mr. Mack's part.

I would also like to note a certain style choice in this book. In the past, some tie-in fiction writers (they need not be named) have ruthlessly killed trees for the express purpose of churning out page after page of ponderous, uninsightful internal monologues. These passages serve little in the way of exposition or story value; they're just poor attempts at characterization done with little to no sub-text.
In "Gods of Night," the author uses action and dialogue to reveal character for great effect.

Example: the scene with Geordi walking through the torpedo factory/bay and then talking with Crusher. Here he is, inspecting the building process (presumably during his off-shift time), walking through the makeshift factory and his thoughts are full of sympathy for the monotonous tasks of the workers there Everything that he says about them could feasibly be said about himself -- the weariness, the endless call to arms of the war effort, the drudgery of it all -- but his primary concern is for others, not himself. He then talks to Beverly and she comments on how he's the only member of the "old guard" left that she can talk to still. He gives her a sounding board for her situation but what really struck me was how lonely he must now be. He's without his best friend (Data), most of his poker buddies, even Reg. His every free moment is spent on the war effort and it's not hard to imagine him coming to the end of his rope sooner rather than later. All of this information can be sussed out from from what's being said and done in this scene, but no where is it expressly written out. What's happening between the lines and left to the reader's intuition is much more powerful an experience than the author having Geordi come in, think "Boy, I sure am lonely and strained" and tell Beverly that very same sentiment in dialogue a few pages later.

This is just one scene that I'm referring to but "Gods of Night" is full of story moments just like this that reveal character and nuance much more clearly and honestly than spoon-feeding straight-forward text to the reader ever could. Good style choice on the author's part, in my opinion.
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Old October 7 2008, 11:32 PM   #178
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The sickbay scenes with Dr. Ree and Will & Deanna were painful to read. So sad.
Agreed. Also sad: mere moments after I read that part of the story my cousin called and told me that she (my cousin) was having a miscarriage.
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Old October 7 2008, 11:38 PM   #179
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Sto-Vo-Kory, thanks for your kind comments. I think the technical term for what you were praising with regard to some of the character moments (particularly La Forge) is "subtext" — the unspoken emotions and motivations behind what a character says and does. And your suspicions about Geordi might be borne out by upcoming events in the trilogy.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I look forward to your comments on books two and three.
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Old October 8 2008, 03:07 AM   #180
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The story of Owen Paris, the bridge scene on the Ranger, the Columbia's engineer and his moments with the Caeliar scientists -- these are all intimately told story beats that are all happening within scenes of massive-scale destruction. The novel is richer because we, the audience, are "with" these characters -- experiencing what they experience -- instead of purely witnessing the destruction from "outside." The character moments of this book, in post after post on this thread, are the most fondly remembered sections of the story for most readers in this forum. This is no accident and deserves to be noted as a fine bit of business on Mr. Mack's part.
Having just finished these scenes, I would have to agree. The Owen Paris death scene is another high-ranking favorite scene for its sheer dramatic tension and realism. Here's a man who we've known to be a complete hard-ass fumbling around like an idiot, essentially (Mack uses words to this effect, iirc). The scene on the Ranger, too, with the crewmen who couldn't bring himself to push the red button; we don't see that enough...

Example: the scene with Geordi walking through the torpedo factory/bay and then talking with Crusher. <snip> What's happening between the lines and left to the reader's intuition is much more powerful an experience than the author having Geordi come in, think "Boy, I sure am lonely and strained" and tell Beverly that very same sentiment in dialogue a few pages later.
That said, contrast that with the description of Tom Paris, where he practically says "look how lonely and depressed I am." One isn't better than the other, but the fact that both are present, and (I haven't quite gotten to the scene you mention yet, hence) (theoretically) work also speak volumes about Mack's ability to craft a powerful story.

The more I read, the more this is become one one of my favorite Trek books of all time!
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