April Art Challenge - Admiral2

My humble entry:

Seven Dreams...:




Here's how it was created:

Original sketch:



Inked and lettered:



Shaded:




What say you?

 

I think it's lovely, but I would loose the dialog. I think its more powerful of an image with out it. What you have drawn conveys exactly what you're trying to get across, so the dialog seams redundant.

 

And more skin on the blondie

 

I wanted to...dang, family-friendly website...


And Tom, you're probably right, but without the dialogue box there was more empty space in the dream balloon than I liked.

Thank you!

 

^Seriously? Have you seen some of the pictures posted here? I wasn't saying naked or slutty looking

 

Actually, I was going for a dream where Seven is her fully Borg self assimilating her fully human self, so making blondie - grown-up Annika Hansen - buck naked while it happens would have made more sense, cause we've all had dreams where we're in a weird situation with no clothes on, right?

But all I needed to meet the contest requirements was a beauty and a beast, and Annika's hot even in conservative clothes, so I didn't indulge...