"The City on the Edge of Forever" Line-by-line

Discussion in 'Star Trek - The Original & Animated Series' started by LeadHead, Sep 2, 2010.

  1. Ziz

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  2. Captain Robert April

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    KIRK: No. We were being chased by a policeman.
     
  3. JanewayRulz!

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  5. LeadHead

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    Edith: Well, I could do with some help around here. Doing dishes, sweeping, general cleaning.
     
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  7. LeadHead

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  8. Orac

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  9. LeadHead

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  11. LeadHead

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  12. Enterprise1981

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    KIRK: Do you run this place?
     
  13. Orac

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    Edith: Indeed I do Mister Kirk.
     
  14. JanewayRulz!

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    (She leaves them.)

    KIRK: Radio tubes and so on. I approve of hobbies, Mister Spock.
     
  15. LeadHead

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    Upstairs at the Canteen, Kirk and Spock get their bowls of soup and bread, then sit down at a large table

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  16. leandar

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    (Edith steps up onto a small stage with a piano)

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  17. JanewayRulz!

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    KIRK: Why?
     
  18. leandar

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    Vagrant: You expect to eat for free or something? You got to listen... to Goody Two-shoes.
     
  19. JanewayRulz!

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    EDITH: Now, as I'm sure somebody out there has said, it's time to pay for the soup.
     
  20. Enterprise1981

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    VAGRANT: Not that she's a bad-looking broad, but if she really wanted to help out a fella in need..