Since finishing the Cabbage I didn’t do an image with it. I tried a few ideas but nonw worked as I would have liked. I finally got around to it. I’m not happy with the Warbird it’s not really good this close up. I’ve had a horrible idea and some time in the future I may end up building my own version. I’m so screwed. One of the main things I wanted to do was show the difference in size and I think it works well doing that. I also think the damage to the Cabbage works better than in some of my other pictures. I think I got all the images I wanted to do out of my system so I can now return to the relay station I’m building.
A few suggestion, if I may. I think you should put the background Warbird mostly in shadow: doing so will hide the under-detailed model. That star and the warbird is drawing the attention away from the Cabbage. Maybe hide the star directly behind the Warbird and have a searchlight from the Warbird shining some hotter lights onto the Cabbage?
I had trouble working with the warbird. The textures on it are pretty bright and I had to play with the levels alot to tone it down as much as I able. I didn't even think about drawing attention away from the Cabbage because I was focused on the damage so you could be right about that.
Great rendering bro! By otherside, Masao pointed good suggestions to improve it. About S. May´s warbird, this is still, the better one available for free. With a few chamfers here and there and new textures, she still can do the job.