I was thinking she should have died with more meaning, more flare, more or a guts and glory as the chief security officer and warrior woman she was.
That was the point of the episode, that death can come quickly and unexpectedly, and with no grand heroics. Personally, I would have rather seen them build her up throughout the episode and then kill her off. The funeral scene felt like 5 pages of padding. The nature of her death is referenced a few times in later episodes.