Another great addition.
I would like to pick up on something David
has mentioned. You made the concious decision to write this story with a cast of mostly inexperienced or at young officers and NCO's. I like that very much as it gives you the great opportunity to create not so flawless characters and have them learn and gain invaluable experience as the story progresses. I would love to see more of that.
This isn't a criticism. I like where this is going and as always am looking forward to more.