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Old September 23 2007, 12:32 PM   #68
CeJay
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Re: Star Trek: Shepard; Recovery, Chapter 6

Another great addition.

I would like to pick up on something David has mentioned. You made the concious decision to write this story with a cast of mostly inexperienced or at young officers and NCO's. I like that very much as it gives you the great opportunity to create not so flawless characters and have them learn and gain invaluable experience as the story progresses. I would love to see more of that.

This isn't a criticism. I like where this is going and as always am looking forward to more.
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