I'd also like to put my comment in here:
Where it is goofy, it is intentionally so, as we clearly can hear from the audio work.
The animation, and regarding that it's done by a single artist on a single computer? Just remarkable!
Thanks for 23 minutes of Animated Star Trek so far! Looking forward for more.
Waiting is surely not the issue here!
EDIT: And in this new edit I couldn't detect anymore the irritating "voice over comm but person in front of the audience". So, well done!
EDIT2: In the beginning, some voice-overs are buried under other audio-effects... but still, this isn't a finished product, so it surely will be redone in time.