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Old May 17 2014, 12:37 AM   #1
Kevin W.
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Star Trek: Remington - "Inceptum"

Some of you have probably seen me post some of my writing on here. It's been a while since I posted but I'm back for more. I've been updating the first episode of Star Trek: Remington bit-by-bit and here's where it stands right now.

http://thepegasus1935.deviantart.com...ptum-383046738

It isn't done yet, of course, and having a full-time job limits the time I have to work on it to nothing more than writing a couple paragraphs at a time, but I persist.

I'd appreciate any advice you can offer regarding improving the narrative portion of the story. I can write dialogue without a problem. It's the other half of the formula that I need to work on.
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