Ok so I'm split on this.
On the one hand I'm glad you gave us such a short little post as it actually allowed me to catch up with this (boy, so much to read here, so little time)
But I'm also disappointed. I wanted a lot more
. I guess we gotta be patient here. What a great setup though.
Overall I like your writing style but I'm a bit concerned with pace. We haven't encountered any major action yet of course but I feel you will have to sacrifice some of your detail to make the action flow faster. That's just a thought and completely premature of course. For now just do what you do and I'm looking forward to read it.