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Old August 19 2007, 02:36 PM   #36
CeJay
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Re: Star Trek: Shepard; Recovery, chapter 3 (part 1)

Ok so I'm split on this.

On the one hand I'm glad you gave us such a short little post as it actually allowed me to catch up with this (boy, so much to read here, so little time)

But I'm also disappointed. I wanted a lot more . I guess we gotta be patient here. What a great setup though.

Overall I like your writing style but I'm a bit concerned with pace. We haven't encountered any major action yet of course but I feel you will have to sacrifice some of your detail to make the action flow faster. That's just a thought and completely premature of course. For now just do what you do and I'm looking forward to read it.
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