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Old August 15 2007, 03:59 AM   #38
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Re: Lexington: Meet The Lady Part 6

This is very good! You've certainly captured the feel of the TOS era. Wesley's crew and the Klingons face a test from some superior beings (similar to the Organians or the creature from "The Savage Curtain") but the situation is still unique. I still can't tell whether this being is benevolent or not, but I think there is a real purpose to these tests, particularly the mysterious references to future events set in motion.

A great story with some fine character work and action!
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