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Old August 8 2007, 10:01 PM   #25
DavidFalkayn
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Re: Chapter Two

You are doing an excellent job in fleshing out the characters here. I have a feeling Marconi is going to catch it in spades soon enough--he keeps going at the rate he's going and he's not going to be a chief for long.

And what is going on with the Shepard? This mystery continues to deepen.

A very nicely done part.
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