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Old August 1 2007, 04:36 PM   #18
TheLoneRedshirt
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Re: Chapter One

Very good! You've definitely caught my interest. I'll just echo that you've put together an intriguing and, yes, dysfunctional crew. The mission is mysterious and Master Chief Arthrun definitely has a history with Admiral Selak, and not a pleasant one.

Keep up the good writing - I'm looking forward to your next installment.
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