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Old March 15 2014, 03:51 AM   #150
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Re: Writing Challenge- The winning entries.

June 2006-Subject: Birth of the Federation


One Small Step by Starkers
I love it!

1. It's truly unique to see the Federation through the eyes of a completely alien race. You invented quite a bit of background given the shortness of the piece. A larger story would be a welcome adventure, quite possibly an entire trilogy.

2. The odd details of the Tn that do not conform to the standard humanoid species we've seen in Trek were also interesting.

3. Have you read "The Galactic Whirlpool" by David Gerrold? That's what this story kind of reminds me of... it has a similar theme except the ship that Earth sends out is a colony vessel, long thought lost. If you haven't read it I highly recommend the story. It was one of the first TOS novels to really take Trek to the next level!
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