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Old February 24 2014, 10:39 AM   #187
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Re: Fan Film Writer's Primer

From Nemesis:

INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE - FOLLOWING

The bridge SHAKES violently under the ruthless attack--

DATA
We are losing dorsal shields --

PICARD
Full axis rotation to port! Fire
all ventral phasers!
The Enterprise ROCKS from a photon torpedo impact --

DATA
Aft shields are down to forty
percent.

RIKER
(to Helm)
Keep our bow to the Scimitar.
Auxiliary power to forward shields.
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