Activating the ship’s intercom, Kuznetsov called out, “Commodore Wesley…Ensign Bathory…respond immediately.” After several moments of no response, the commodore repeated his request, once again receiving no answer.
, this is riveting stuff, but shouldn't the above emboldened word be "Commander" since the Commodore is no longer aboard?
I like writing in my post-NEM timeline, because I think that getting back to exploration after a long period of war and strife is not an easy thing to do, especially when some of the officers have known nothing but war for their entire careers. I don't think I have the necessary attention to detail for the TOS era to write same, but I really enjoy reading it.
Keep it coming.