Re: Star Trek: Phase II - "Kitumba" Officially Released!
For what it's worth, just for people's info...all of MY scripts also were gone over by a industry professional story editor who works in the film industry as a story editor and screenwriter. (redundant but wanted to make my point.) As I was Phase II's story editor, I felt it would be a case of "a doctor who has himself as a doctor has a fool for a doctor". So both Kitumba and Mind-Sifter got the Hollywood treatment. (People should remember that what gets put on the screen is not necessarily what was on the page to begin with. Case in point: the "corvette line" was James'.) (Walter Koenig also went over Kitumba for me before we filmed it.)
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