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Old December 17 2013, 12:23 AM   #53
DCR
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Re: Star Trek - Horizon (Enterprise Feature-Length Fan Film)

As a writer and editor, I have one almost universally applicable critique statement for almost any piece. I look at the dialogue and ask if the character needs to make that statement, or can it be made shorter?

So many fan productions have dialogue that belabors the obvious, and repeats unnecessary information.
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