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Old November 22 2013, 10:26 AM   #23
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Re: An Adventure in Space and Time - Grade and Discuss

That was good. They could've used voiceover from Hartnell in the last scene ("Ah, so you're my replacements" and cut at that point) to make it clear what they were trying to achieve - as it was, it was a little messy. Also, I never realised that Hartnell had been half-pushed out... I knew he'd gone due to failing health, but I'd assumed it was his decision (or GP's orders).
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