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Old November 17 2013, 10:36 PM   #59
BrentMc
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Re: Writing questions

I would also like to describe my ship. I thought I could have the Captain give an Admiral a tour, or just describe the places on board when a scene happens there. What do you think?

Also as far as showing and not telling to describe my characters what ways do you like to use?

"She swept her brown hair out of her face."
"He had to stoop to enter the shuttle."
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