Re: Was Roddenberry a Terrible Writer?
Removing that line actually makes things worse.
Also cut were a few lines just before that while the Enterprise
is waiting for the impact from the energy pulse. Kirk asks Spock if the screens will protect the ship, to which Spock replies that any calculations to determine this would be impossible.
"Many things seem clever to an imbecile." --Captain Thelin th'Valrass, USS Enterprise-- "The Chimes at Midnight"