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Old February 8 2007, 07:29 PM   #12
CeJay
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Re: FIRST CONTACT: The Iron Horse

So they go in guns blazing ... well, that should be fun.

I also only just realized who Lily Sloane is. I don't know how well known the character is but perhaps it would be worth to drop a few more hints about who she is in beginning of the story.

Some of her toughness during her trial makes a lot more sense to me now that I know who she is.
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