Easy to fix all those errors, then.
(I asked about bookstores as a clue to the author's platform because bookstores are loathe to carry self-published titles, even if the product is good. There is the longstanding racket whereby stores send books back for a sizable refund within a period of time, if they don't sell. They don't trust self-pubished authors to have the financial backing to cover big refund checks. Which is true.)