Welcome to the board. have you been here before, or did you join because you thought some of us might be interested in your short?
I still don't understand why some people always start a post or thread with "Hey". We're sitting right here, not a block away. We've already opened the thread so you don't need to say "Hey" to get our attention.
Hey is just fine, it means "hi" after all. At least that's friendly.
I think if you picked up the pace on your acting it might work even better.
"Faster. More intense." George Lucas is that you?