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Old October 4 2013, 09:02 PM   #2
TheLoneRedshirt
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Re: UT: TFV-The Quality of Mercy

You did a great job of writing an awkward encounter between old friends. Banti is struggling to reconnect with his old protege', but the distance between he and Glover seems greater than that of rank. Things have changed for both of them, and not necessarily for the better.

And now, another group prepares to intercept the myriad "invaders" from the Delta Quadrant. Here's hoping their mission goes smoother than the other intercept groups!

Somehow, I doubt that will be the case.
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