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Old September 29 2013, 10:49 PM   #12
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Re: Rock Jockeys: "Gold-Plated Trouble"

You have got some great characters here. A very touching and poignant story that Marie has to tell, especially hoe despite all the blood and trauma she's witnessed its a single tear that beats her.

Very well told. More please TLR.
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