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Old September 25 2013, 08:12 AM   #11
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Re: USS Vengeance & Mass Destruction.

It didn't have to be a whole scene, though. Just 30 seconds or a minute from the crew. Some reaction shots. Have Sulu hesitate to take his order.

"Scan the enemy vessel for signs of life."

-Sulu is frozen at his console.-

"Mr. Sulu!"

"There's no way anyone survived that..."

Ya know? Personally, if I had edited it, I would have intercut the destruction with some reaction shots from the Enterprise crew, some people covering their mouths, shock, murmuring. Just a little more oomph.
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