Captain Bearclaw - Grant - Maab - appologies for the late reply.
Don't worry, thank you for your input!
The pages you posted are from the very well done "Making of Star Trek II - The Wrath of Khan
" by Allan Asherman.
(also another good source for alternate script versions of the movie by the way).
But the most intriguing picture is this one:
PLEASE, try to remember! Someone must have a VHS of this deleted scene! Now I'll try a Vulcan mind meld to see inside your memories.... just joking