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Old September 23 2013, 09:34 PM   #42
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Re: Refugee Crisis: Border Cutter Silverfin - "Bright New Day"

Great chapter, Bry! As usual you provide vivid imagery and excellent dialogue. The face-off between Kes and Susperia was both well-written and surprising. I truly did not see that outcome.
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