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Old September 16 2013, 05:30 PM   #2698
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Re: So What Are you Reading?: Generations

I know some here warned me, but I'm really struggling with Double Helix: Infection. The constant internal thoughts, then repeating them in prose, or just breaking up the action/dialogue to get someone's own opinion. I get what the author is going for, but it really doesn't work.

Beverly really doesn't sound like Beverly either.
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