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Old September 11 2013, 04:41 AM   #5
Candlelight
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Re: My Idea of the 12th Doctor's First Scene

INT. TARDIS - CLARA'S BEDROOM

Clothes everywhere. We TRACK ALONG the room until we reach

THE BED

And find Clara lying there with a smile on her face. Post coitus. Someone is behind her but we can't see them yet.

CLARA
"How was that big boy?"

Clara rolls over and WE SEE

THE DOCTOR

Recently regenerated, the look of sheer exhaustion still on his face. Not the young man of 11 but an older man. Looks like he swears a lot. Regeneration energy fades from view.

CLARA
(smiling)
"Blimey, talk about bathing in an afterglow..."

CUT TO

TITLES.
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