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Old September 6 2013, 07:29 PM   #2
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Re: My Idea of the 12th Doctor's First Scene

wellsweb wrote: View Post
And Mr. Moffit, feel free to use this if you like it.
I would, but I don't read the forum.






I could not resist and took the liberty of doing some improvements to your screenplay:

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