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Old September 4 2013, 07:12 AM   #125
Aranamac
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Re: TF: Revelation and Dust by DRGIII Review Thread (Spoilers!)

I wonder how the energy and propulsion of this book would've been different if it was organized into two parts: the DS9 narrative, ending with the surprise Bajora visitor arriving with absolutely no context, followed by the Kira/Keev narrative.

I enjoyed both stories, but found the alternating between narratives to be tonally jarring. Staying with DS9, then staying with Kira might've had more emotional punch.
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