Now is a good time for all of you to let me know anything you absolutely love or absolutely can't stand.
, the lines on this revision flow together SO
much better, especially in 3-D; your "work" model is better than 90% of the crappy "real" models one sees at scifi-meshes.com these days. Unfortunately, the flow is now so velvety smooth and liquid that what I can only presume is a shuttleboat or "captain's yacht"...
...looks completely, jarringly out of place.
Unless this feature is going to be exactly the same color as the surrounding hull and will only be a faint outline on the finished product, I'd either hide the entire thing under retractable flush-mounted doors that follow the existing lines of the Grandeur
, modify the profile of the "yacht" so that it better matches the surrounding ship, or consider scrapping the feature entirely.