Captain Kathryn wrote:
It's one of my favorites because I just love it when Starfleet stops acting like Starfleet and goes rogue. Also was a big fan of John Savage from seeing him on Dark Angel which I watched before this episode. Usually when Starfleet goes rogue it's some ivory tower admiral that we don't relate to, seeing Ransom as a captain stuck in the same place as Janeway only in worse straits was great stuff.
I DO like seeing Starfleet go rogue!
But...J/C fighting...can't...like it... AHHHH.
Also Janeway is scary at some parts. And I love Janeway. Although I like pissed off Janeway too. During some bits she had crazy eyes!! lol
I know Picard would never have crazy eyes but Picard would never have crazy makeup sex with Chakotay after the fighting. You just need to tweak your J/C into finding advantage in the crazy and the fighting
See how I care about Janeway, that I would suggest such a thing.. anything to make it all for a greater character good.
Your first point is quite logical.
However, the second... not if you're going to call the show Star Trek: Voyager instead of Star Trek: Galactica.
Not sure which point is which and whose and what?
But a bit of breaking down under huge stress makes sense.