Re: STAR TREK INTO DARKNESS - Grading & Discussion [SPOILERS]
There were a couple of clever bits, and then a couple of others which I thought dragged on too long - Picard's "First Duty" speechifying, to name one. Needs a little work yet.
"If the man doesn't believe as we do, we say he is a crank and that settles it. I mean it does nowadays, because we can't burn him."
— Mark Twain, from Following the Equator