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Old June 9 2013, 02:18 PM   #5
Ovation
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Re: If you could ONE line of dialogue to STID, what would it be..?

I'd simply change two words in the dialogue. When Kirk and Scotty are running to engineering and Scotty says "one day, one bloody day"--change "day" to "week".

Instantly resolves much (albeit not all) of impression that things happened too fast. However, I'm fine with the line as is--the "too fast" thing is, to me, a very minor nit to pick.
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