King Daniel Into Darkness wrote:
I stopped reading at:
"...even the ship designed to function in the vacuum of space could handle the pressures underwater ó which Iím 99% sure it canít..."
Which alone displays the writer's sheer lack of Trek knowledge. For starters, you may remember Insurrection hiding a village-sized holoship underwater on the Ba'ku planet.
Why do you stop there and not continue reading? Also, is the holoship the same as the Enterprise? And why go underwater? Why not stay in orbit?
There are more flaws, by the way.