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Old June 3 2013, 01:03 AM   #20
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Re: Phase II - Act One of "KITUMBA"

Well, having read a JML Kitumba draft one can argue that the episode did alter the story rather significantly as is, first by crunching a 2-parter down to 1, adding characters, etc. etc. Given that, tightening and trimming the dialog wouldn't have been any bigger sin.
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