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Old June 2 2013, 01:10 AM   #90
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Re: STAR TREK: a series treatment starring APRIL and COLT

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not a single question in this thread about my work into this, my characters or my stories.
I just don't think we're there yet.

indeed it's a big concept, but i'm attempting it.
Hey, more power to you, and I hope for you that you succeed. But in order to do so, in my opinion, you'll have quite a bit of, let's say, pragmatizing to do.

like i mentioned, i don't mind productive, warranted criticism. i've received no criticism but character attacks and equivocation.
Now that's a lie, Zekkie. We have pointed out that the format of your series is problematic, that the tone of your treatment gives the strong impression that this will not be directed at the general audience, and that you are over-prepared and over-hyped, but in the wrong way. That's not character attacks.
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