you gave up after one sentence?! LOL
and one word is that much of a turn off?
First off, humour and comedy are different things. Humour is incidental. Comedy is a focus.
Before I read further, I want to know what you mean by "comedy".
and keep in mind, this is a 'treatment' for execs (chiefly CBS), not necessarily the masses.
Masses ? "Lol"