An excellent first outing! I knew I'd heard that computer voice somewhere before.
My only complaint was that the story dragged a couple of times, and anytime someone sings in a Star Trek production, it makes me cringe just a little. Still, that was handled pretty well here.
One of the best things about the episode is the surprise finale. That caught me totally off-guard. Nice touch!
And Scotty was played well, though I would have liked to see his connection to his shipmate in "Who Mourns for Adonais?" made a bit clearer.
Overall, a totally enjoyable first trip around the quadrant! I look forward to the next fan film!