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Old May 22 2013, 11:55 PM   #26
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Re: Looking for critiques of my writing

Long time no see, everyone. Here's the latest update to episode 1.

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B-DN...it?usp=sharing

You'll notice there's a significant chunk of story missing near the end. That's intentional. I already had the scene between Boswell and Trevak written ahead of time for various reasons. I'm in the process of writing the bits that lead to that scene. Enjoy.
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