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Old May 12 2013, 11:57 PM   #206
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Thanks Junxon, glad you enjoyed it. No comment on the hairlines.

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I rather rolled my eyes at the teaser because it's so rote
and technobabbly. Things improved after that, though. I was much more interested in the archaeological part of the story than all the shooting, which just feels obligatory. The real fireworks are between the characters, not the pew pew zap stuff.
Yeah that's fair. Funnily enough, the next one I'm writing has rather less of that, since I really want to go all out and do a proper TNG style story, and try to get it right on all fronts. Or at least closer to right. I suspect you'll approve.

And thanks for watching, Maurice.
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