Please don't accuse other posters of trolling, Admiral2
. If you find a post objectionable hit the notify Mod button on it instead.
, please try to be a bit less provocative in your wording when you offer critique to writers here. People usually invest plenty of time and passion into their writing without anything material in return and while a lot of fan fiction (overall, generally speaking) isn't very good it would be wise to keep that in mind when giving feedback.
Let's get back on topic.